Billycan Creek

When I get tired of the concrete and tar
there’s a place I can go, and not travel far,
that hasn’t been touched by progress at all;
nature stands still beneath gums growing tall.

And in amongst shadows with sprinkled light,
there’s rippling water and birds taking flight,
a sprinkling of colour amongst shades of green,
there’s burrows and scratching where something has been.

So I give you a picture of Billycan Creek
where flora and fauna are all quite unique,
and nothing is spoilt where I sit on a log
with my video camera and terrier dog.

A single stem orchid stands better than stark
with a deep purple flower that closes at dark,
and a coprosma tree with red berries quite sweet
is a pleasure to find with its bounty a treat.

In mistletoe weeping from a host in disguise
I video drifting jezebel butterflies,
and sitellas who cling to an old stringybark,
then high on a limb…the nest of a mudlark.

So I give you a picture of Billycan Creek
where flora and fauna are all quite unique,
and my camera is ready, with eyes like a hawk
where now with my dog on a casual walk. 

Here the undulate water it constantly flows,
diverting ‘round logs and where overhang grows,
a haven’s provided for what could be prey
and in the shallows there’s a freshwater cray.

Some red brow firetails flit down for a drink,
there’s a burrow that’s new with no reason to think,
for a wombat has scratched out a hole and a mound;
but a wombat’s nocturnal who lives underground.

So I give you a picture of Billycan Creek
where flora and fauna are all quite unique,
and I’ve only a second to capture a scene,
so my camera is ready to help me convene.

The scent of boronia hangs heavy and strong,
lances of grass trees are a seed clustered prong,
white ants have covered an old stump with mud,
and Christmas bush bracts are now starting to bud.

On a hazel bush branch a grey fantail sits prone
in a nest made of cobwebs, to a tapering cone,
and a chattering chough tells me that I don’t belong, 
now my camera has died so I can’t say it’s wrong…

So my battery is flat and I’m back at the log
with a film full of nature, and my terrier dog,
and you’ve read my picture of Billycan Creek
where flora and fauna are all quite unique.

©2011 Lindsay Laurie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 9:45 AM
Lindsay: This creek is a treasured sanctuary in my mind. I’d give ‘a million quid’ to smell Boronia again, amid the damp earth smells. Thanks for writing this wonderful poem. SuZ
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May 12, 2015 at 9:25 PM
Lindsay, thanks for taking me to Billycan Creek. Yes, that's what you did; I saw it, I felt it, I smelled it, I experienced the entirety of it. * * * A marvelous poem. You are a wonder.
Fleming Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Superb imagery awash with beautiful, vivid colours...Excellent poem!! My very best regards, Lindsay!! :) john. P.s A "7".
Laurie Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Hello John... naturally for the sake of writing a picture poem about the local creeks, I made it look so glorious, but of course, as everywhere, nature provides a balance in reality and I've left out the nasties. Thanks mate for your comment - Lindsay
Duggan Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 2:03 AM
Oh Lindsay that is such a typical Aussie poem, loved it right to the end, you certainly bring Australia out in your poems and that is what I love about them, you are a genius, take care my friend..................Vera.........
Laurie Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 6:46 PM
G'day Vera... oh I don't know about being a genius Vera. But it so enjoyable to write about our country and what it offers us. I consider myself to be very lucky. Thank you for your comment Vera - Lindsay
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 2:25 PM
This poem is "whimsical & magical " in its content and its delivery. Your word choices elegantly define the beauty you wish to capture and convey to the reader.
Laurie Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 6:43 PM
Hello Emile... thanks for your encouraging comment Emile. Yes, it does appear magical, but I left out the opposite side of things like mosquitoes, leeches, march flies, and snakes. Still in all, I really enjoy walking these small creeks and seeing what they offer. Thank you Emile - Lindsay
Wigley Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:52 AM
You are very skilled at imbuing a real sense of place in your work. I had to pause from reading it and go and fetch a hat with some corks on. Nice work, Laurie. Regards, Viv
Laurie Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 10:03 PM
G'day Viv... I think even the swaggies forgo corks on their hats these days and use aerogard, although, if you ever get to experience the outback bush flies, you'll certainly understand the need for corks on a hat. Thanks for your comment Viv - Lindsay
Mcdaid Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 8:40 AM
very beautifully painted pen laurie love the journey it took me on
Laurie Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Thank you Liam... I'm pleased you enjoyed the penned bush walk, and I'm certain you would in reality if it is ever possible. Thank you Liam - Lindsay
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 7:24 AM
Fabulous write. I can see your photo vividly. Once upon a time, up on the Murray, my father dropped the front of our old Falcon into a wombat hole. And you thank me for the memories, Now it is my turn to thank you. Such a pleasure.
Laurie Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 9:57 PM
G'day Scott... thank you for reading and commenting Scott. We lived beside the Murray for twenty years in Sunraysia. There was plenty to see and write about from that experience. Catch you again shortly Scott - Lindsay
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