Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Billowing Askew

Apricot marmalade wispy clouds upon the blue
canvas, swiftly changing sunrise reveals a surprise_
charcoal gray, a textured smoke billowing askew
across the eastern sky, Suddenly diamond dew
drops fall upon grasses, Everything expressed anew
as the sun rises, the moon bidded
adieu, this day will pass; tomorrow, too
Apricot marmalade wispy clouds upon the blue  

Sponsor: Rick Parise
Contest: Enjambment
I know it doesn't make any sense...
Written October 19, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2014 at 4:03 PM what wonderful imagery,Sara. Congrats for your win.

Brenda Meier-Hans November 3, 2014 at 11:42 AM I love how it almost sings and I want to dance as I read this. Brilliantly penned Sara. Congratulations on your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 3, 2014 at 10:32 AM Unique brilliant write Sara! Congrats on big win!

Kayod5 Kayode November 3, 2014 at 7:37 AM Yours stands out, congrats Sara.

Hija De La Luna November 3, 2014 at 3:46 AM apricot marmalade clouds upon the blue canvas..lovely, lovely imagery, Sara! love it! Congratulations!

Maurice Yvonne November 2, 2014 at 10:52 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win with this photo albumn of stunning imagery.

Barbara Gorelick November 2, 2014 at 6:17 PM The apricot marmalade clouds are just wonderful. Congrats, this made me smile. BG

Pandita Sietesantos November 2, 2014 at 4:28 PM Beautiful piece and excellent enjambment, Sara! Congratulations, my friend on a fine win! Pandita

Joseph May November 2, 2014 at 3:02 PM Wonderful write Sara...Congrats on your win

Debbie Guzzi November 2, 2014 at 2:31 PM Sweet, sweet imagery! Congrad's Light & Love

Jan Allison November 2, 2014 at 2:30 PM Outstanding imagery Sara - you painted an incredible picture - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid October 22, 2014 at 5:33 PM really love how you drew this excellent piece sara

Wilfred Aniagyei October 21, 2014 at 11:02 AM Couldn't put it better myself..... simply alluring! It jumbles up and down in your head.... like puzzle pieces trying to find each other..... Beautiful!!!

Eileen Manassian October 20, 2014 at 5:33 AM Lovely, Sara. You have such a way about you when it comes to describing the beauty and grandeur of nature. Alluring. I tried writing about the dawn yesterday....I wrote and wrote...enjambment doesn't come easily to me. Needless to say...I didn't post it. Hugs. Good luck!

Ravi Sathasivam October 20, 2014 at 2:22 AM Excellent. Enjoyed your work Sara. Thanks for sharing.

Nette Onclaud October 19, 2014 at 9:26 AM sure is enjambment, sara.. I haven't seen this contest yet, this will do well!.. huggs

Casarah Nance October 19, 2014 at 7:39 AM It sure does make sense, I see it as a canvas and an artist is painting all these fresh colors upon it. I love the first/end line, you are so unique with your descriptions! refreshing!