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Billowing Askew

Apricot marmalade wispy clouds upon the blue canvas, swiftly changing sunrise reveals a surprise_ charcoal gray, a textured smoke billowing askew across the eastern sky, Suddenly diamond dew drops fall upon grasses, Everything expressed anew as the sun rises, the moon bidded adieu, this day will pass; tomorrow, too Apricot marmalade wispy clouds upon the blue Sponsor: Rick Parise Contest: Enjambment I know it doesn't make any sense... Written October 19, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2014 4:03:00 PM

what wonderful imagery,Sara. Congrats for your win.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/3/2014 11:42:00 AM

I love how it almost sings and I want to dance as I read this. Brilliantly penned Sara. Congratulations on your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/3/2014 10:32:00 AM

Unique brilliant write Sara! Congrats on big win!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/3/2014 7:37:00 AM

Yours stands out, congrats Sara.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 11/3/2014 3:46:00 AM

apricot marmalade clouds upon the blue canvas..lovely, lovely imagery, Sara! love it! Congratulations!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/2/2014 10:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win with this photo albumn of stunning imagery.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/2/2014 6:17:00 PM

The apricot marmalade clouds are just wonderful. Congrats, this made me smile. BG

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/2/2014 4:28:00 PM

Beautiful piece and excellent enjambment, Sara! Congratulations, my friend on a fine win! Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 11/2/2014 3:02:00 PM

Wonderful write Sara...Congrats on your win

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/2/2014 2:31:00 PM

Sweet, sweet imagery! Congrad's Light & Love

Jan Allison

Date: 11/2/2014 2:30:00 PM

Outstanding imagery Sara - you painted an incredible picture - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rick Parise

Date: 11/2/2014 12:56:00 PM

Talk about imagery!!!!!WOW - To grasp each fleeting moment!!!!!Great Picture!!!!ENJOYED!!!!!CONGRATS -

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/22/2014 5:33:00 PM

really love how you drew this excellent piece sara

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 10/21/2014 11:02:00 AM

Couldn't put it better myself..... simply alluring! It jumbles up and down in your head.... like puzzle pieces trying to find each other..... Beautiful!!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/20/2014 5:33:00 AM

Lovely, Sara. You have such a way about you when it comes to describing the beauty and grandeur of nature. Alluring. I tried writing about the dawn yesterday....I wrote and wrote...enjambment doesn't come easily to me. Needless to say...I didn't post it. Hugs. Good luck!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/20/2014 2:22:00 AM

Excellent. Enjoyed your work Sara. Thanks for sharing.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/19/2014 9:26:00 AM

sure is enjambment, sara.. I haven't seen this contest yet, this will do well!.. huggs

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/19/2014 7:39:00 AM

It sure does make sense, I see it as a canvas and an artist is painting all these fresh colors upon it. I love the first/end line, you are so unique with your descriptions! refreshing!