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Billowing Askew

Apricot marmalade wispy clouds upon the blue
canvas, swiftly changing sunrise reveals a surprise_
charcoal gray, a textured smoke billowing askew
across the eastern sky, Suddenly diamond dew
drops fall upon grasses, Everything expressed anew
as the sun rises, the moon bidded
adieu, this day will pass; tomorrow, too
Apricot marmalade wispy clouds upon the blue  

Sponsor: Rick Parise
Contest: Enjambment
I know it doesn't make any sense...
Written October 19, 2014

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2014

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/5/2014 4:03:00 PM what wonderful imagery,Sara. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/3/2014 11:42:00 AM I love how it almost sings and I want to dance as I read this. Brilliantly penned Sara. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/3/2014 10:32:00 AM Unique brilliant write Sara! Congrats on big win! Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/3/2014 7:37:00 AM Yours stands out, congrats Sara. Login to Reply

Hija De La Luna Date: 11/3/2014 3:46:00 AM apricot marmalade clouds upon the blue canvas..lovely, lovely imagery, Sara! love it! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/2/2014 10:52:00 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win with this photo albumn of stunning imagery. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 11/2/2014 6:17:00 PM The apricot marmalade clouds are just wonderful. Congrats, this made me smile. BG Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 11/2/2014 4:28:00 PM Beautiful piece and excellent enjambment, Sara! Congratulations, my friend on a fine win! Pandita Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/2/2014 3:02:00 PM Wonderful write Sara...Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/2/2014 2:31:00 PM Sweet, sweet imagery! Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/2/2014 2:30:00 PM Outstanding imagery Sara - you painted an incredible picture - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/22/2014 5:33:00 PM really love how you drew this excellent piece sara Login to Reply

Wilfred Aniagyei Date: 10/21/2014 11:02:00 AM Couldn't put it better myself..... simply alluring! It jumbles up and down in your head.... like puzzle pieces trying to find each other..... Beautiful!!! Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/20/2014 5:33:00 AM Lovely, Sara. You have such a way about you when it comes to describing the beauty and grandeur of nature. Alluring. I tried writing about the dawn yesterday....I wrote and wrote...enjambment doesn't come easily to me. Needless to say...I didn't post it. Hugs. Good luck! Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/20/2014 2:22:00 AM Excellent. Enjoyed your work Sara. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/19/2014 9:26:00 AM sure is enjambment, sara.. I haven't seen this contest yet, this will do well!.. huggs Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 10/19/2014 7:39:00 AM It sure does make sense, I see it as a canvas and an artist is painting all these fresh colors upon it. I love the first/end line, you are so unique with your descriptions! refreshing! Login to Reply