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Bill begged me to view his errrection* It required my urgent inspection But what he really meant Was he’d put up our tent It’s sturdy and firm; its perfection! I have not erred here lol I had to put in extra letters or i got stars! 8/10/19

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Date: 8/26/2019 1:39:00 PM
LOL, hilarious - clever way to beat the Soup censors too
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Date: 8/15/2019 5:21:00 PM
Another funny one Jan. Well done!!! Pat
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Date: 8/13/2019 7:28:00 AM
LOL...great limerick!
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Date: 8/12/2019 2:08:00 PM
Tents and errrections usually go hand in hand, Jan! Thank you for a hearty laugh:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/11/2019 10:10:00 AM
Lol! Jan, This is hilarious! Putting up a tent and camping was the farthest from my mind. I enjoyed the read. Enjoy the rest of your weekend :-) Alexis
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Date: 8/11/2019 7:41:00 AM
LOL! Reminds me of the movie “Kate and Leopold. It is a back in time movie where one character is snickering as they talk of the “errrection” going up. Funny one, Jan!
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Date: 8/10/2019 10:37:00 PM
Wow that tent really got up! Lol
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Date: 8/10/2019 10:20:00 PM
G'day Jan … that mind of yours could have finally got you into trouble. Very good - Lindsay
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Date: 8/10/2019 8:06:00 PM
Hahaha... wonderful Jan. I have never been camping, sounds like fun, haha. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 8/10/2019 5:07:00 PM
Haha Jan love how you got around the soup police censor. You might have just opened the flood gates lol. Tom
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Date: 8/10/2019 11:35:00 AM
You have outdone yourself with this one, Jan, I am laughing out loud. Thank you for the wonderful addition to my day. Hugs, John
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Date: 8/10/2019 9:00:00 AM
Excellent Limerick Jan, pacey, rolls off the tongue and really funny. :)
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