Bilko a Vignette

In the base motor pool
See an off-limits card school-
A scheming Bilko takes the pot
Hoodwinking top brass was his game,
Fast talking his claim to fame.

 | Year Posted 2008

NOTE:A vignette is a 5 line variation on a clerhew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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September 17, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Loved Phil Silvers Brian - your light verse does him justice. Do you remember a kids' TV cartoon called Top Cat (First called Boss Cat in the UK due to a cat food being called Top Cat?) It was based on Bilko's characters. Cheers - Gary
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September 17, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Not really Gary..my kids might .I was into my sport/career era in the Top cat days
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September 17, 2021 at 4:34 AM
Good morning, Brian. Sgt Bilko...Yes! I remember him. What a character he was. You have captured him exactly in this delightful vignette.
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September 17, 2021 at 7:50 AM
Yes,Elaine I used my vignette for light verse before I discovered he clerihew.
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