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"bikini View"

On feminine sands, wide spreads, buns of swells__ well fed, view, of the sand crab??? For: “Tropical treasures In Honor of: Sweetheart of Poetry Soup Placed #4

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/31/2010 11:57:00 PM

haha.very cute! ~Always&Forever Lynette

James Fraser

Date: 7/14/2010 12:04:00 PM

Awesome title John, I bet it has lured so many readers. Super Haiku >> James

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 7/13/2010 3:07:00 PM

Thnx for the comments on my Haiku, John! I always appreciate your kindness. Later, JA

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/13/2010 4:41:00 AM

LOL...Hillarious!! ROF

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations John on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 9:03:00 PM

Congrats on the 4th place win, John

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2010 4:14:00 PM

Interesting point of view from the crab...Good luck in the contest...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 12:56:00 PM

LOL -- Love this one and am so glad for your win, John! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/11/2010 12:34:00 PM

Congratulations John on your completely different viewpoint poem and on your win. Love, Joyce

Daver Austin

Date: 7/11/2010 11:00:00 AM

Oh, John! This poem must have many interpretations. Great image. Love, Dave

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 9:48:00 AM

hahaha, I liked the humor of this one, john! LUv, Andrea ps. congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2010 9:04:00 AM

Congrats Moses on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this unique and humorous write ..from the vacation photos.. thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/11/2010 5:05:00 AM

Hi John, I am going to try to start commenting again. I have just been too weepy these past three months…commenting became difficult. I do enjoy reading your wonderful poetry, though. And I appreciate your strengths. Thanks for understanding. Good luck in the "Tropical Treasures" contest. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/10/2010 11:45:00 AM

Great write, John. LOL. Nice going. Good luck and thanks for your comments. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2010 5:35:00 PM

So appreciate your support of my new contest Moses.. and glad u enjoyed the photos too.. in an hour on my way back to reality.. with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/9/2010 3:12:00 PM

Great smiles here!!! love this!! always Michael

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/9/2010 3:07:00 PM

The view of the sand crabs is just lovely. They are certainly well fed. The ocean has many dishes for them to glean from. What a life of joy? Great job! Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/9/2010 2:51:00 PM

LOL -- Very funny, John. The "buns of swells" might work well in the jellyfish contest as well. I just posted a new contest: "Heaven Sent Smiles." Hope you'll enter! Best wishes in Linda's contest. Love, Carolyn