"bikini View"

On feminine sands, 
wide spreads, buns of swells__ well fed, 
view, of the sand crab???

For: “Tropical treasures
In Honor of: 
Sweetheart of Poetry Soup
Placed #4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 11:57 PM
haha.very cute! ~Always&Forever Lynette
Fraser Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Awesome title John, I bet it has lured so many readers. Super Haiku >> James
Anderson Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 3:07 PM
Thnx for the comments on my Haiku, John! I always appreciate your kindness. Later, JA
Culverhouse Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 4:41 AM
LOL...Hillarious!! ROF
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 9:03 PM
Congrats on the 4th place win, John
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Interesting point of view from the crab...Good luck in the contest...Sara
Devonshire Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 12:56 PM
LOL -- Love this one and am so glad for your win, John! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations John on your completely different viewpoint poem and on your win. Love, Joyce
Austin Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Oh, John! This poem must have many interpretations. Great image. Love, Dave
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 9:48 AM
hahaha, I liked the humor of this one, john! LUv, Andrea ps. congratulations!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Congrats Moses on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this unique and humorous write ..from the vacation photos.. thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv..
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 5:05 AM
Hi John, I am going to try to start commenting again. I have just been too weepy these past three months…commenting became difficult. I do enjoy reading your wonderful poetry, though. And I appreciate your strengths. Thanks for understanding. Good luck in the "Tropical Treasures" contest. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Taylor Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 11:45 AM
Great write, John. LOL. Nice going. Good luck and thanks for your comments. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 5:35 PM
So appreciate your support of my new contest Moses.. and glad u enjoyed the photos too.. in an hour on my way back to reality.. with luv..
Falotico Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Great smiles here!!! love this!! always Michael
Spence Sr Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 3:07 PM
The view of the sand crabs is just lovely. They are certainly well fed. The ocean has many dishes for them to glean from. What a life of joy? Great job! Joseph
Devonshire Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 2:51 PM
LOL -- Very funny, John. The "buns of swells" might work well in the jellyfish contest as well. I just posted a new contest: "Heaven Sent Smiles." Hope you'll enter! Best wishes in Linda's contest. Love, Carolyn
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