Big Words, Small Words Its Really Up To Her

She wasn't a learned woman per se or so I was told, 
by the air that surrounded her late in the eve as she talked away; 
Its as if she plucked it from the time belt of knowledge, 
Nostradamus style, I would say: 
Sometimes she addressed Kings & Queens, other times paupers and cats 
she wrote like she tasted her words, rolled them around on her tongue,  
but other times she blew them through you like wind, sifting through a kite.  
Scattered reckless like a hungry seagull, carving a morsel only to die for her trade.
She was water going round a solid rock always turning,  
rearranging herself to please everyone and no one. 
She suffered no fools except for the man who placed his palms around her, 
shaping her like a piece of wet clay.   
Playing nice in a world of pipers and mutes, she was a diamond in the rough; 
He once told her there was a woman called Helen who made millions, 
hosting a show on the tele, she didn't even have a high school degree.   
He knew the scattered wild garden she tilled, yes she was a beautiful mess,  
one that reminded him of a he, of long ago.    
She was a woman with big words and small, who wrote for animals, 
humans, aliens, Neanderthals, scientists, priests, and flowers.  
She was both the flame and the match, always ready to strike. 

Written by: Beautiful Mystic Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Stark Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:40 PM
Nostradamous style Fantastiv
Rose  Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 12:55 PM
thank you Curie, glad you enjoyed it :)
Hind Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 11:38 AM
I really liked this, especially the end. Would that all writers can 'strive' like this. :)
Rose  Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 2:17 PM
You have your own beautiful flame dear Paige, I seen your poetry and it is powerful too
Eslinger Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 6:09 AM
OMG, Vie, a Fav for many reasons! I love the poem & her! I love your ‘formatting.’ Your portrait is completely painted with obvious descriptive, blended brush strokes AND its pulsating under-painting. Exquisite! You’ve put it as Narrative, tho i’d also call it a perfect example of Prose Poetry. I’m working on a new blog re that & may include this as an example. Bravo!
Rose  Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 2:16 PM
thank you Sally, I'm honored that your loved it enough to use as an example, I'm not very good with forms, so I never know how to peg it, thanks I will change it to prose then
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 5:39 AM
she wrote like she tasted her words, rolled them around on her tongue, but other times she blew them through you like wind, sifting through a kite--your words bring forth her elegant image for the reader, Vienna. Words weaved splendidly throughout.
Rose  Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 2:15 PM
thank you Vijay, your input is always taken to heart :)
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