Big Mouth

Someone stepped on his foot
That big mouth opened wide
The odor that came from inside
What had he consumed, garlic root

Hey, would someone take out
The trash again and put in bin
The one outside the door
While Frebreze is sprayed galore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 10, 2009 at 1:03 AM
I had a good belly laugh with this one. I am a garlic lover, but am very much aware of the high odor it caries. good write . Thanks for your comments as well
Pickett Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 11:20 AM
Smells bad in your description.....Good write Sara......:JP]
Culverhouse Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 5:53 PM
yuck mouth, harry
Chachere Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 3:08 PM
haha!!^.^ i can't stop laughing, for some reason this is hilarious to me. awesome,awesome poem. "Got a dirty mouth, clean it up with orbit."
Sheart Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 1:24 PM
Hi Sara To funny, smile. Keep writing hun! Love Light Truth Patty Sounds like you better keep that "Frebreze" handy!
Guzzi Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 1:16 PM
hmmm not quite sure! Light & Love
Lewis Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 11:15 AM
Too funny. Brought a smile and a need for Listerine
Freakasso Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 10:18 AM
Real funny one Sarah,those burps and slurps,even from tiny twerps can get you nauseated,when you pray to God and say Oh Lord;I wish those mouths were gated.Loved your humour,hope you lots morein your forthcoming poems.Thanks a zillion for your lovely comment.As usual as enthralling as the Garden Of Eden. God Bless, Prince
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October 7, 2009 at 8:05 AM
Hi Sara I experience this all the time. Especially with the big one outside. I like to keep that "mouth closed". Love your work. Marty
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