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Big Mouth

Someone stepped on his foot That big mouth opened wide The odor that came from inside What had he consumed, garlic root Hey, would someone take out The trash again and put in bin The one outside the door While Frebreze is sprayed galore

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Abraham L

Date: 10/10/2009 1:03:00 AM

I had a good belly laugh with this one. I am a garlic lover, but am very much aware of the high odor it caries. good write . Thanks for your comments as well

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 11:20:00 AM

Smells bad in your description.....Good write Sara......:JP]

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/7/2009 5:53:00 PM

yuck mouth, harry

Lynette Chachere

Date: 10/7/2009 3:08:00 PM

haha!!^.^ i can't stop laughing, for some reason this is hilarious to me. awesome,awesome poem. "Got a dirty mouth, clean it up with orbit."

P Sheart

Date: 10/7/2009 1:24:00 PM

Hi Sara To funny, smile. Keep writing hun! Love Light Truth Patty Sounds like you better keep that "Frebreze" handy!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/7/2009 1:16:00 PM

hmmm not quite sure! Light & Love

Ts Lewis

Date: 10/7/2009 11:15:00 AM

Too funny. Brought a smile and a need for Listerine

Prince Freakasso

Date: 10/7/2009 10:18:00 AM

Real funny one Sarah,those burps and slurps,even from tiny twerps can get you nauseated,when you pray to God and say Oh Lord;I wish those mouths were gated.Loved your humour,hope you lots morein your forthcoming poems.Thanks a zillion for your lovely comment.As usual as enthralling as the Garden Of Eden. God Bless, Prince

Marty Owens

Date: 10/7/2009 8:05:00 AM

Hi Sara I experience this all the time. Especially with the big one outside. I like to keep that "mouth closed". Love your work. Marty