Big Mama Bear - Just a Cub Continued:

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Continued: So, there I was on the porch standing in shock This Big Mama Bear sitting right in front of me On her butt on the grass! Just feet away! I thought something was wrong with her It was a hot day, she was breathing heavy I tried to open the door a little to get a photo But my hands were shaking and my heart racing As she moved, I couldn’t keep it steady I was in a ‘once in a life time moment’ right then I had never been so close to a bear that big Then she got up and I realized she was ok She turned around to walk across the yard As I fumbled with the door still shaking…. I finally got a photo, from behind in the distance -----As she entered the trees to leave--- ----I said goodbye to my friends--- ----Until next time--- Heidi Sands 6/16/17

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Edward Mccall

Date: 6/20/2017 10:15:00 AM

That would've been an awesome sight to see you're quite fortunate Heidi where you live and get to see the things in nature You get to see.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/20/2017 10:18:00 AM

Hi Edward. Yes, it was a once in a life time moment, that close to the mother bear from the porch. I am very grateful to see everything I do in this beautiful place I live. Thank you :)

Maria Williams

Date: 6/17/2017 5:38:00 AM

Wonderful that you were able to take that once in a lifetime photo. Thanks for sharing it to us in your lovely verse ...Maria

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2017 5:41:00 AM

Yes, it would have been more amazing if I could have gotten the photo of the mother just off my porch sitting in front of me, but I couldn't manage that. I could only get her walking away. I am happy to share it. Thanks :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/16/2017 11:39:00 PM

She wasn't testing your beds was she? Or do I have that story backwards??? Enjoyed the write...

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2017 5:37:00 AM

Hi Charlie. That is so funny, you have me laughing :) Thanks for the comment. I forget how the 3 bear story goes exactly lol

Jan Allison

Date: 6/16/2017 6:29:00 PM

Wow Heidi you sure were lucky to be able to capture this moment and immortalise it in a lovely poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2017 6:37:00 PM

Yes, Jan. It was really a once in a life time moment to be that close. Thank you :)