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Big Kid

He called me big kid The fire lit in me, he did We met through a mutual friend He was shooting pool, I was avoiding men Beginning to enjoy my single fate Ironically he asked me for a date He was charming, arrogant and fun I was distant not wanting to date anyone "Only if your birthday is June fifth," I said He showed me his license, it was, I ran instead The date was of an ex, who was selfish and hurtful Evasive, secretive, manipulative and deceitful It’s no wonder why I had my guard up with him If he was anything like my ex, getting involved would do me in At first, we were just friends, I insisted He continued to pursue me as I resisted Less time spent together than apart Should have been obvious it was doomed from the start I wore brown, he wore black leather Naturally we were not meant to be forever The story that prevailed with him and me Had me confused about my destiny I learned over time about he and I We were two different souls that did not see eye to eye Time in itself does not mean Lasting true love or the real thing Once again living single is a blessing Learning and growing from another life lesson Where my story goes Only heaven knows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/4/2010 1:31:00 PM
This almost makes me want to read his poem about the relationship as well. The torment and trauma of life comes through loud and clear in this poem. Great job. Where your story goes...tell us about in prose. :-)
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:18:00 PM
Our intuition saves us from much- nice poem
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Date: 4/11/2010 11:44:00 AM
very nicw write and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:39:00 PM
ENJOYED, THANK YOU .
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:22:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... enjoyed your creative write tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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