Big John

Let me tell you a story from the old wild-west;
Of a terrible lawman with a star on his vest.
His title was “Ranger”; not bound to a town
He studied the outlaws then hunted them down.

One long hot summer; played like a pawn
He’d failed to take down the man called “Big John”.
He was tired and thirsty, his mood like black jet
As he rode into Dodge his sights were still set
On Big John!

He stabled his horse, and checked out the saloon
‘cause he’d heard the big man liked to drink there at noon.
Through the wide swinging doors, he strolled to the back
His face as long as a wagon-wheel track.

The scowl on his face told me this man was risky,
But I was the bar keep, and he needed whiskey.
So I poured him a double in a clean mason jar
And slid it down deftly to the end of the bar.

He quaffed it and gave me a tip of his hat.
I thought it was over, except for the fact
That his mood was still dark, like rain in a flood,
I knew in my gut there was bound to be blood.

There in the corner; his back to the wall,
He waited with patience; said nothing at all.
Just stared at the space ‘bove the wide swingin’ doors,
His hands at his sides, drooping down toward the floor.

It was quarter past noon when the room darkened some,
Big John in the doorway; blocking the sun.
Two shots rang out from the man in the vest.
Two blood stains emerged on the big fella’s chest.

Big John just stood there; there in the door,
Then the glasses all rattled as John hit the floor.
Dry-gultched, like a fox at a watering hole
Big John was finished; so, likely his soul! 

The old wanted poster said “Dead or Alive”.
They just didn’t care how Big John arrived!
The Ranger just smiled and sighed, “One more round!”
Then he gathered his pony and rode out of town.


May 9, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/12/2017 8:44:00 AM
I so much enjoyed reading this.. Good one!
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/12/2017 11:26:00 AM
Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment on this poem. I enjoyed writing this one. - Dean
Date: 7/11/2017 9:55:00 AM
I could see the bar scene unfold. The whole story felt like one of those westerns I would watch with my grandpa. Great job! And glad the lawman got Big John!
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Date: 7/11/2017 10:04:00 AM
Wow, high praise. It wasn't really a family-friendly ending but at least the good guy prevailed. Thanks for taking time to comment! - Dean
Date: 5/10/2017 6:59:00 PM
This is so cool, Dean. I was reminded of that old song Big Bad John with its similar ballad style. I think we call this cowboy poetry. It rocks!
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/11/2017 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. I had a lot of fun writing this. I appreciate you stopping by. - Dean
Date: 5/10/2017 7:43:00 AM
Wow! 7
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/11/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Glad you enjoyed it! - Dean
Date: 5/10/2017 12:45:00 AM
Very well written , took me to an old western I watched where John Wayne was the hero. It held my attention from start to finish, and I've learned a new form of poetry- A metrical tale, might suit some of mine. I've been wondering what to call them. Thanks for sharing this great one.
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Dean Wood
Date: 5/10/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Maria, can't wait to read some of yours. Just not enough hours in the day sometimes!
Date: 5/9/2017 10:31:00 PM
Wow, impressive. It played out like a western movie in my mind. I remember hearing a song called "Big John" ... I think ... Very well done :)
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Date: 5/10/2017 11:28:00 AM
Thanks Lenna. I actually played off the song a little only in this story he's the villain.
Date: 5/9/2017 4:31:00 PM
I love a good western... and this one was great..
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Dean Wood
Date: 5/9/2017 5:27:00 PM
Glad you liked it Joseph. Thank you!
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