Big Grey

Big Grey was my favorite cat of all time.
He came with no grand pedigree.
He didn't need that for that wonderful cat
Had enormous affection for me.

He was but a stray who somehow found his way
To this home he'd be welcomed to stay.
He made himself king and ruled everything
And forgot he was ever a stray.

There were other cats here whom he treated as mere
Common things to be kept in their places.
But my lap was his own, which he quickly made known
To the others, not one of their spaces.

That beautiful cat, always there when I sat,
His front legs round my neck he'd entwine.
And he'd stare in my face, 'til I needed my space
And I shooed down that sweet pet of mine.

He'd never more roam for this was his home
Where he'd be contented for life.
It was easy to see he belonged here with me,
Away from the stress and the strife.

I was caught unaware, finding him lying there
Unable to answer my call.
I couldn't believe he was going to leave,
This dear cat whom I loved most of all.

Now that he's gone I know he has gone on
To the place where good kitties should be.
May he find up above an angel to love,
Just as much as he used to love me.



wpm hm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 11:08 PM
JOYCE, Congratulations on your sweet Pet win. XOX ~LINDA~
A. Sharma Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 11:30 PM
What a delightful write Joyce..Congrats on big win!!
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 11:54 AM
JOYCE, CONGRATS ON YOUR LOVELY PET WIN. LOVE ** SKAT **
Onclaud Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 1:23 AM
alluring work, joyce...huge congrats!..huggs
Taylor Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Nice story, Joyce. Outstanding write. Congrats.
Scars Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Joyce, very touching..thank you for being a part of my contest *smiles* -luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 12:48 AM
Dear Joyce, This poem is so touching, especially for a cat lover like myself. They bring us so much joy as your poem so beautifully expresses. They work their way right into our hearts. Just lovely. Mahalo, Connie
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January 20, 2010 at 4:56 AM
Congratulations Joyce, You wrote well! Your “Cat Tails” contest entry, sponsored by: Constance La France is among the winners! Honorable Mention Award, puts you in the winner’s circle! You did at great job letting your creativity flow with this sad and touching poem. (I think he'll be there waiting to meetyou.) Keep up the good writing. SMILES… Dane Ann
Sweetheart Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the CAT contest.. wonderful words to read... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Washam Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Congratulations on your HM in the contest Joyce. It is nice to see a familiar name here. Take care and Have fun. Steve
Haick Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 4:28 PM
Hey Joyce, congratulations on your win in the contest! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations on you win in Constance's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Muzzey Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest, a great poem. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Dufresne Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 7:01 PM
a very beautiful poem Joyce. You are right . I would not want to have judged these either. So many kitty lovers! and that's a good thing.cCongrats to you on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 12:10 PM
I love this, Joyce. I am loving all the cat poems appearing here. I don't know how Constance will choose among them becuase they are almost all winners. I miss my cat that was like this one of yours. I can feel your love for him here, and if it were me, I'd probably rarely shoo him from my face. I love when cats get close like that. andrea
Buckling Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 9:51 AM
A wonderful tale, nothing is more contenting than a big furry cat, content in your lap. Good luck with the cat contest, if you entered. Thank you for your kind comments.
Mckenzie Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 5:04 PM
Joyce~ What a story I can relate to how sad its so hard when we lose our pets, so sorry! I hope your entering this in the cat tails contest? If so good luck! Laura :)
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January 10, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Joyce, it's always amazed me how cats can declare ownership of a human lap. I had a grey tabby that used to chase the other two cats off my lap by hissing and even growling at them. It sounds like Big Grey won your heart and I'm sorry he's no longer with you. I'm sure you miss him a lot. Very nice poem! Love, carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 1:44 PM
Loosing a pet is hard because they become a family member. Nicely done write expressing your love for this stray that became part of your life. Sara
Richards Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 1:43 PM
What a sweet story, Joyce. A wonderful dedication to your dear Big Grey...and great entry to the contest. Good luck! ~ Carrie
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