Big Bouquets--Trochee

Gardens are my big passion.
I love how mine grows.
With sunflowers the fashion
There are highs, no lows.

Dominating every way,
Their idol, the sun.
Big bouquets for Mother's Day,
Would be so much fun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 2, 2012 at 8:28 PM
Joyce,, a wonderful congratulations in Andrea's 7/5 TROCHEE contest~ :-) PD
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June 1, 2012 at 1:08 AM
Congrats on your win, Joyce! I love to read your work when your love of nature and gardening shines through. Thanks for sharing your passion. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "The 7/5 Trochee" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 1:42 AM
Joyce congrats on your win..David
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 12:19 AM
Joyce, I just loved the theme of your Trochee. If it had perfect meter all the way through, I'd have put it in the top!! Congratulations. Thanks for trying it out.
Williams Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:51 AM
Joyce I like it, check 3rd line syl count..good luck..David
Burch Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 9:29 PM
Oh I do love sunflowers , Joyce!! Beautiful write...best wishes in the contest...big hugs, love ya deb
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May 6, 2012 at 8:29 PM
Joyce, dominating can be fun to a certain point... great poem.. full of passion... take care..pd
Harrell Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 7:18 PM
Fun poem. Love it. Toquyen
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