Mario De Paz Poet Rhyme

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This is a "lento" composition following the indications of Lencio Rodriguez.
Notice the rhymes among the first words of each line and the original structure of the lento.

Big Bang

Universe was only a little sphere
Adverse to the empty space around
Converse to expand , for self adhere
Inverse to produce light and sound.

Exploded then in a blowing sudden
Inverted quickly its very sticky nature
Expanded energy in the space fallen
Started of shiny stars the adventure.

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Poet Destroyer A April 5, 2015 at 10:37 PM MARIO, HOPE YOU ARE ENJOYING YOUR EASTER EVENING.... LINDA Mario De Paz April 6, 2015 at 3:23 AM I hope that you too enjoy these days

Matthew Anish October 1, 2014 at 3:19 PM You take on the ambitious task of describing cosmological discoveries in verse. Very nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Mario De Paz October 2, 2014 at 9:08 AM Thank you Matthew, big bang is fascinating because it happened in a fraction of a second breaking the mith of relativity!

Poet Destroyer A July 9, 2014 at 12:11 AM Mario, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Mario De Paz October 2, 2014 at 9:18 AM Thank you, Linda. I am answering late because I was on vacation without internet, but I am following you and your well deserved success on this site!

Kira Price February 6, 2014 at 6:06 PM I love the show The Big Bang Theory! and yep pretty much what they said happened lol Mario De Paz October 2, 2014 at 9:30 AM Dear Kira, thank you for coming. It is a pleasure to meet you and I shall visit you soon

Poet Destroyer A November 9, 2013 at 10:51 PM Congratulations, Mario.... like the slight alliteration last line... xox..LINDA

Fatima Nusairat November 9, 2013 at 5:42 PM Congratulation

Karen Anglesey November 9, 2013 at 12:27 PM WOW... nice visuals and very creative. Congrats on the win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta November 9, 2013 at 4:28 AM Congrats on the win , Mario Mario De Paz November 9, 2013 at 9:30 AM Thank you, but I do not know what I won, maybe a contest, but I cannot find it on the site

Skat A November 8, 2013 at 8:58 PM Mario, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

Courtney Courtney October 15, 2013 at 2:17 AM like the topic Mario De Paz October 15, 2013 at 11:50 AM Thank you for commenting. These verses come out from the suggestion of Lencio Rodriguez to compose a new form, the "lento" composition which has alterne rhymes and the first word of each verse rhymng with thw prwcwding every four verses.

Bl Devnath June 5, 2013 at 11:53 AM It's a brief history of big Bang very nicely penned. Loved the style. Always....,bl

Karen Anglesey May 19, 2013 at 12:26 AM This is a very descriptive anology of our earth's beginning. Love the theme and great creativity. Excellent :)

Betty Bateson May 16, 2013 at 8:17 AM Nicely done. Betty

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2013 at 3:02 PM Cool poem about that theory. I love the tv show of the same title as well!!