Big Bad Mixed Message

Three little pigs, as you remember--
two lazy pigs build shoddy huts,
one shack of straw and one of timber--
was meant to warn us of short cuts.
The third pig builds with brick and mortar,
and in that house his brothers quarter,
because their homes, to their alarm,
prove flawed to keep them safe from harm.
The two had laughed and called him crazy
because he’d labored while they played.
All three survive. What point was made?
It seems to me the moral’s hazy.
Who would prepare instead of play,
if someone else will save the day?

1/11/2022

* Pushkin Stanza *
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Peck Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 9:01 AM
Very wise words indeed.
Romios Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Really creative. PS…. I love it. There’s tons of your poetry I missed. Panagiota
Anaya Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 7:06 PM
A thought-provoking poem. The third pig will be the example of what works, the other two had a great scare. We learn from the moral of the story. Good Day!
Awtry Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Anaya :) ps
Proxenos Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 11:53 PM
But for how long would the first two last, wouldn't the third sleep sounder as he knew what he built was secure, somehow I feel that honest good hard work reaps rewards. A though provoking poem and very clever. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Awtry Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 7:08 AM
You make a very good point. Always good to have your thoughts. I hope you are having a wonderful day! :) -ps
Ball Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 9:49 AM
Good point PS. It doesn't say if the other two pigs learned anything from their mistake or not or if the two lazy pigs ended up living off their brother. Loved this. God Bless, JB PS I think a devotional collection is a great idea.
Awtry Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:02 AM
You make a great point, and have fleshed out more of what is missing in that story! I'm glad you liked this piece :) ~ps
Brewer Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:21 PM
I perceive a touch of realpolitik in your analysis, PS. But then if the big bad wolf had some TNT in his huffs and puffs, he could have got all three; and that is power politics. Thanks for the stimulating fun tale.
Awtry Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:29 PM
Yes the TNT would have changed things up! I think I would like to see the two unwise pigs "eat some crow." A big fat apology would have been nice! Thank you for stopping by. So glad that you liked this one :)
Romios Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:20 PM
Extremely clever!, P.S. You are a bright poetess without a doubt Panagiota
Awtry Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Oh, I am so glad you liked this one Pangie. It was a bit like a word puzzle to figure out but in the end I was glad I tried the form :)
Gentile Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 4:51 AM
Very insightful is your poem P.S. It is then a matter of trust! Very well written !!!
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Mike! :) ~ps
Trifiatis Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 1:02 AM
Thought-provoking, my friend, P.S.A.! Blessings.
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Demetrios! Blessings to you, as well. :) ~ps
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 8:26 PM
You Represent a great moral to this story, too many people count on others to take care of things for them because they are too lazy to do it themselves. One thing is true… the lazy pigs lost everything when their houses were blown down. The pig with the Brickhouse kept everything and saved his fellow friends. Excellent rhyme! I thoroughly enjoyed this P.S. blessings xxoo
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 9:02 PM
You are right Connie! Thank you for all your support. Im glad you enjoyed this piece. :) -ps
Rushing Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Nicely written P.S.! Life never seems fair, the only hope is that God keeps score. Have a wonderful day!
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:38 PM
Thank you Wren! Yes, surely God sees it all! :)
Wolf Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:21 PM
So true. A very hazy moral. I can't imagine what the ants are thinking. Maybe they didn't pull a fast one on those lazy grasshoppers. :) gw
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:37 PM
Laughing at myself because I admit I prefer the happy endings. Maybe it's enough that it is obvious who the hero is... Thank you for stopping by :) ~ps
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:59 AM
wonderful moral I love your wise words based on the story:-) hugs Jan xx
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 1:01 PM
thank you, Jan. Hope you are doing well :) ~ps
Leffanta Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:24 AM
Certainly not Donald Trump! You did a great job on this one! Aloha! Rico
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:27 AM
Wow, Mr. Trump is wascally. I didn't see him hiding in this poem ;) Thx Rico for your kind words about this little write. ~ps
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