Big Bad Mixed Message

Three little pigs, as you remember--
two lazy pigs build shoddy huts,
one shack of straw and one of timber--
was meant to warn us of short cuts.
The third pig builds with brick and mortar,
and in that house his brothers quarter,
because their homes, to their alarm,
prove flawed to keep them safe from harm.
The two had laughed and called him crazy
because he’d labored while they played.
All three survive. What point was made?
It seems to me the moral’s hazy.
Who would prepare instead of play,
if someone else will save the day?

1/11/2022

* Pushkin Stanza *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 4/11/2023 9:01:00 AM
Very wise words indeed.
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Date: 2/18/2023 10:23:00 AM
Really creative. PS…. I love it. There’s tons of your poetry I missed. Panagiota
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Date: 8/29/2022 7:06:00 PM
A thought-provoking poem. The third pig will be the example of what works, the other two had a great scare. We learn from the moral of the story. Good Day!
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Date: 8/29/2022 7:23:00 PM
Thank you Anaya :) ps
Date: 1/14/2022 11:53:00 PM
But for how long would the first two last, wouldn't the third sleep sounder as he knew what he built was secure, somehow I feel that honest good hard work reaps rewards. A though provoking poem and very clever. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/15/2022 7:08:00 AM
You make a very good point. Always good to have your thoughts. I hope you are having a wonderful day! :) -ps
Date: 1/14/2022 9:49:00 AM
Good point PS. It doesn't say if the other two pigs learned anything from their mistake or not or if the two lazy pigs ended up living off their brother. Loved this. God Bless, JB PS I think a devotional collection is a great idea.
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Date: 1/14/2022 10:02:00 AM
You make a great point, and have fleshed out more of what is missing in that story! I'm glad you liked this piece :) ~ps
Date: 1/13/2022 1:21:00 PM
I perceive a touch of realpolitik in your analysis, PS. But then if the big bad wolf had some TNT in his huffs and puffs, he could have got all three; and that is power politics. Thanks for the stimulating fun tale.
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Date: 1/13/2022 1:29:00 PM
Yes the TNT would have changed things up! I think I would like to see the two unwise pigs "eat some crow." A big fat apology would have been nice! Thank you for stopping by. So glad that you liked this one :)
Date: 1/13/2022 1:20:00 PM
Extremely clever!, P.S. You are a bright poetess without a doubt Panagiota
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Date: 1/13/2022 1:30:00 PM
Oh, I am so glad you liked this one Pangie. It was a bit like a word puzzle to figure out but in the end I was glad I tried the form :)
Date: 1/12/2022 4:51:00 AM
Very insightful is your poem P.S. It is then a matter of trust! Very well written !!!
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Mike! :) ~ps
Date: 1/12/2022 1:02:00 AM
Thought-provoking, my friend, P.S.A.! Blessings.
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios! Blessings to you, as well. :) ~ps
Date: 1/11/2022 8:26:00 PM
You Represent a great moral to this story, too many people count on others to take care of things for them because they are too lazy to do it themselves. One thing is true… the lazy pigs lost everything when their houses were blown down. The pig with the Brickhouse kept everything and saved his fellow friends. Excellent rhyme! I thoroughly enjoyed this P.S. blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/11/2022 9:02:00 PM
You are right Connie! Thank you for all your support. Im glad you enjoyed this piece. :) -ps
Date: 1/11/2022 2:25:00 PM
Nicely written P.S.! Life never seems fair, the only hope is that God keeps score. Have a wonderful day!
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Date: 1/11/2022 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Wren! Yes, surely God sees it all! :)
Date: 1/11/2022 2:21:00 PM
So true. A very hazy moral. I can't imagine what the ants are thinking. Maybe they didn't pull a fast one on those lazy grasshoppers. :) gw
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Date: 1/11/2022 2:37:00 PM
Laughing at myself because I admit I prefer the happy endings. Maybe it's enough that it is obvious who the hero is... Thank you for stopping by :) ~ps
Date: 1/11/2022 11:59:00 AM
wonderful moral I love your wise words based on the story:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2022 1:01:00 PM
thank you, Jan. Hope you are doing well :) ~ps
Date: 1/11/2022 11:24:00 AM
Certainly not Donald Trump! You did a great job on this one! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/11/2022 11:27:00 AM
Wow, Mr. Trump is wascally. I didn't see him hiding in this poem ;) Thx Rico for your kind words about this little write. ~ps
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