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Bid Summer Adieu

Pastel skies bow to fall's bright tints , Awe struck by these sumptuous hues Leaves surrender their hold on trees, Sweet musty scents wafts on a breeze As seasons yield to the other I see dazzling beauty in change Time now to bid Summer adieu 4th place 7lines 8/8/8/8/8/8/8 count Contest: Farewell Summer Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Date:9/6/2019<

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2019 5:12:00 PM

Great description of summer's end, Brenda. Congrats for your win.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 10:51:00 PM

Andrea thank you so much! And thanks for the visit!;)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/12/2019 4:14:00 PM

enjoyed this descriptive write - congrats on your win!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 10:50:00 PM

Charlotte thank you so much! Much appreciated!;)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2019 12:53:00 PM

love glimpse of summer's near ending, brenda... fine congrats and thanks for joining..huggs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 2:04:00 PM

Nette thank you for sponsoring it! Much appreciated!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2019 12:41:00 PM

- Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 12:45:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise!;)

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 9/12/2019 11:16:00 AM

Congrats for your win for this beauty, Brenda! Delighted to see you on the winner's list. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 11:23:00 AM

Thank you so much!;)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/12/2019 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Great imagery so vivid.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 11:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by and the congratulations!;)

John Lawless

Date: 9/12/2019 7:54:00 AM

Nicely done Brenda, each facet of fall a tribute to its beauty.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 10:35:00 AM

Thank you John so nice of you to say!;)

David Mohn

Date: 9/7/2019 8:15:00 PM

beautifully descriptive Brenda :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/8/2019 10:52:00 AM

Thank you so much David but I think you got me best in this one!;)

John Fleming

Date: 9/7/2019 9:14:00 AM

Brenda Chiri - wow! Stunning little muse this: vibrant and evocative comes readily to mind. Lots of affection! :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2019 11:25:00 AM

Ahh John thank you so much! As I have said your approval of my work leaves a smile upon my face that lasts all day long! You have been missed my dear friend!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/7/2019 8:34:00 AM

Say it isn’t so, I’m not ready to say goodbye. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2019 11:23:00 AM

I am but I'm not! Lol I do love fall but I hate winter! Now if we could only have spring and fall it would be heaven ! Summer has been too hot of late and winter....well it's just getting colder! Thx Rick For your wonderful comment!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 9/6/2019 9:35:00 PM

What an amazing little write, I do believe this should be a top winner, it is at least in my mind!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2019 7:30:00 AM

Thx John it means a lot to hear that! And it remains to be seen! When I think I have a great one I get N/A'd lol so we will see! ;)

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/6/2019 6:47:00 PM

The season of the beach and baseball is being replaced by the season of football and colorful leaves. Nice job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2019 7:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Matthew so nice to meet you!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/6/2019 5:16:00 PM

Gorgeous...one can see fall ushering summer out through your words...well penned my friend! :) hugs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2019 5:22:00 PM

Sandy you are far too kind! Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment!;)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/6/2019 4:34:00 PM

This is beautiful Brenda. I enjoyed it :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2019 5:21:00 PM

Heidi thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it I wasn't too sure about it at first!;)

Chris Green

Date: 9/6/2019 11:23:00 AM

Really nice Brenda. This beauty should do well in the contest. Best wishes.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2019 2:24:00 PM

Thanks Chris but I kinda doubt it I've read a couple that entered too and way better than mine! But thank so much for the boost of confidence!;)