Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Bid Summer Adieu

Pastel skies bow to fall's bright tints , 
Awe struck by these sumptuous hues 
Leaves surrender their hold on trees,
Sweet musty scents wafts on a breeze 
As seasons yield to the other
I see dazzling beauty in change 
Time now to bid Summer adieu

4th place

7lines 
8/8/8/8/8/8/8 count
Contest: Farewell Summer 
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date:9/6/2019<

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Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2019 at 5:12 PM Great description of summer's end, Brenda. Congrats for your win. Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 10:51 PM Andrea thank you so much! And thanks for the visit!;)

Charlotte Puddifoot September 12, 2019 at 4:14 PM enjoyed this descriptive write - congrats on your win! Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 10:50 PM Charlotte thank you so much! Much appreciated!;)

Nette Onclaud September 12, 2019 at 12:53 PM love glimpse of summer's near ending, brenda... fine congrats and thanks for joining..huggs Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 2:04 PM Nette thank you for sponsoring it! Much appreciated!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2019 at 12:41 PM - Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 12:45 PM Thank you Anne-Lise!;)

Robert L. Hinshaw September 12, 2019 at 11:16 AM Congrats for your win for this beauty, Brenda! Delighted to see you on the winner's list. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 11:23 AM Thank you so much!;)

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 12, 2019 at 11:07 AM Congratulations on your win. Great imagery so vivid. Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 11:09 AM Thank you so much for stopping by and the congratulations!;)

John Lawless September 12, 2019 at 7:54 AM Nicely done Brenda, each facet of fall a tribute to its beauty. Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 10:35 AM Thank you John so nice of you to say!;)

David Mohn September 7, 2019 at 8:15 PM beautifully descriptive Brenda :) Brenda Chiri September 8, 2019 at 10:52 AM Thank you so much David but I think you got me best in this one!;)

John Fleming September 7, 2019 at 9:14 AM Brenda Chiri - wow! Stunning little muse this: vibrant and evocative comes readily to mind. Lots of affection! :) john Brenda Chiri September 7, 2019 at 11:25 AM Ahh John thank you so much! As I have said your approval of my work leaves a smile upon my face that lasts all day long! You have been missed my dear friend!;)

Richard Lamoureux September 7, 2019 at 8:34 AM Say it isn’t so, I’m not ready to say goodbye. Hugs Rick. Brenda Chiri September 7, 2019 at 11:23 AM I am but I'm not! Lol I do love fall but I hate winter! Now if we could only have spring and fall it would be heaven ! Summer has been too hot of late and winter....well it's just getting colder! Thx Rick For your wonderful comment!;)

John Hamilton September 6, 2019 at 9:35 PM What an amazing little write, I do believe this should be a top winner, it is at least in my mind! Brenda Chiri September 7, 2019 at 7:30 AM Thx John it means a lot to hear that! And it remains to be seen! When I think I have a great one I get N/A'd lol so we will see! ;)

Matthew Anish September 6, 2019 at 6:47 PM The season of the beach and baseball is being replaced by the season of football and colorful leaves. Nice job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Brenda Chiri September 6, 2019 at 7:14 PM Thank you so much Matthew so nice to meet you!;)

Sandra Adams September 6, 2019 at 5:16 PM Gorgeous...one can see fall ushering summer out through your words...well penned my friend! :) hugs Brenda Chiri September 6, 2019 at 5:22 PM Sandy you are far too kind! Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment!;)

Heidi Sands September 6, 2019 at 4:34 PM This is beautiful Brenda. I enjoyed it :) Brenda Chiri September 6, 2019 at 5:21 PM Heidi thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it I wasn't too sure about it at first!;)

Chris Green September 6, 2019 at 11:23 AM Really nice Brenda. This beauty should do well in the contest. Best wishes. Brenda Chiri September 6, 2019 at 2:24 PM Thanks Chris but I kinda doubt it I've read a couple that entered too and way better than mine! But thank so much for the boost of confidence!;)