John Lawless Poet Couplet

Bid On My Love - Sold Out

Bid on My Love – Sold Out


My heart is now on a wanted poster
having escaped twisted passions toaster

Now, in reflection, I’m forced to confess
each moment together – painfully priceless.


12/8/2015

submitted to – Bid on My Love – Poetry contest
sponsor – Tammy Reams

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Skat A December 16, 2015 at 12:45 AM John, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2015 at 6:30 PM yours was so original. Congrats. John Lawless December 14, 2015 at 9:33 PM Thanks Andrea

Sandra Haight December 14, 2015 at 6:01 PM Great humor, John, Congrats on your win. Sandra

Balveen Cheema December 14, 2015 at 10:28 AM John, the twinge of humour is so appeasing!congrats! John Lawless December 14, 2015 at 9:33 PM Yeah, ya gotta laugh at yourself sometimes

Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 10:05 AM I love your humor in this one, John...congratulations. John Lawless December 14, 2015 at 9:32 PM Thanks Lin

James Inman December 14, 2015 at 9:32 AM Got a chuckle, John. Enjoyed.

Eileen Manassian December 9, 2015 at 10:34 AM Lovely....I really enjoyed this. Thanks ever so much for your recent visit to my blog. It is so much appreciated. :) John Lawless December 9, 2015 at 3:42 PM Eileen, always nice to hear from you, your presence in the soup adds to its "eclectic" flavor.

Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2015 at 6:02 PM GREAT job with this one and a bit humorous. ME LIKES John Lawless December 9, 2015 at 3:41 PM Yeah, I was going to call it an "Un-couplet"....

Tim Smith December 8, 2015 at 5:08 PM Good one John...enjoyed John Lawless December 9, 2015 at 3:40 PM Thanks Tim, a bit of terse humor