Bid On My Love

Bid on my love and you shall be pleasantly surprised
At the depth of understanding and passion in my eyes

I'm genuine, jubilant and down to earth with no pretense
Life with me will be content, blissful and thrillingly intense

11/28/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Salehi Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Marry me, Marry me...
Salehi Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 1:12 AM
Dear Cecilia... all is fun, fun for all.....
Macfarlane Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Smiling
Bear Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Tell them what they are missing and let them come to find out if it is true. Well done Blessings Edith
A   Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Cecilia,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 16, 2016 at 1:04 AM
Very nice poem. You must scan first his heart and to find the finest result all qualities must be set with set theory, i think, probably you will be able to find a solution to go ahead..... Lol! every one does that unknowingly, but the loving heart follows the economic theory of "wants", said wants are unlimited but the means are limited. Smile always. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Bear Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:05 PM
You are offering the world to someone Hope the bid is high enough to light the flame. Hugs Edith
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January 5, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Sweet write. Hi Ces! Can't help but smile at the antics of the two Canadians down there :-). A belated thank you for the birthday greet at SKAT's blog. I'm back, as you can see. How are you? Hope to see you here soon! hugs
Macfarlane Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Glad you are back my friend, I took an unintentional break as well, finding time to write and comment is a challenge sometimes. I have missed you and this site. Big hug
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:58 AM
This is a great entry Cecillia. Best wishes for a blessed 2016. Blessing and love, Connie
Macfarlane Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Thank you Connie, may 2016 be full of laughter, love and good health. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 12:46 AM
61 Million!
Macfarlane Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Wow.....you bid the highest Arthur, so I'm yours! (tee hee) May 2016 bring you much joy, love and health. Hugs
Yvonne Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 2:07 PM
1 billion!!!! because of my French background I have to show my passion or you could say I can be just a tad extreme.
May Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 9:40 PM
A lovely poem Cecilia.. best wishes
Macfarlane Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Thanks Joseph. May 2016 bring you much joy, love and health. Hugs
Yvonne Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 9:02 PM
60 million dollars as a starting bid. Excellent write!
Macfarlane Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:15 PM
Thanks Maurice. That is an impressive bid! May 2016 bring you much happiness, good health and love. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 12:47 AM
61 million!!!! :)
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Loved the poem, whats the opening bid? :)
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December 5, 2015 at 11:02 AM
for your Love, I offer my frame....compensating you with the most pleasurable pain....I also offer my mind....to inspire any writer's block you may find....you will also receive my heart....so you will know Love from the very start....and that means I will mate your Soul....making a bond more valuable than gold....so in short, I will buy you with nothing but myself....that's the only way our Love will never know death....so what you say....lol....this is Beautiful Cecilia....;)
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January 10, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Thank you Eric, love your passionate response, you are priceless! May 2016 make all your dreams come true, full of good health, laughter and love! Hugs
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 12:49 PM
I bet you get lots of bids! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Macfarlane Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 3:30 PM
Thank you Jan. Hugs
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November 29, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Thank you Teppo. Hugs
Pinet Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 12:10 PM
A well structured poem that flows with strong emotional currents. Emile.
Macfarlane Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Thank you Emile. Hugs
Lane Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 11:52 AM
Ya can't ask for much more than that. Well done, Cecilia.
Macfarlane Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Thanks Lin. Hugs
Smith Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Oh I like this one Cecilia
Macfarlane Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Thank you Tim ...glad you liked. Hugs
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