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Bi-Polar, Schizo Effective Disorder

He was locked inside his own mind searching for the key to freedom that he'd never find. Daily struggles led to addictions. He fought the devil while he prayed to God "tell me what's real and what is fiction." Loneliness ate at him every day. He wondered what he'd done to chase them all away. He was afraid to close his eyes so he dare not go to sleep, else the devil heard his cries. His Mama told him about a savior who could take his pain away, so he put his faith in God and he accepted Christ that day. At the bottom of the bottle, he finally found rest. Now all his Mama can do is pray, that God had mercy when he took his final breath... Dedicated to my son, with love, Mama

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Date: 6/8/2020 8:11:00 PM
Heartfelt write Susan..
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 6/8/2020 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Michael. Bless you. Susan Maree
Date: 2/22/2019 7:08:00 PM
G'day Susan … there seems to be so much of this affliction in this modern time. It's such a sad heartbreak for all - thank you Susan - Lindsay
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 2/23/2019 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay.-Susan
Date: 1/26/2019 1:33:00 PM
It used to be thought that the mentally ill were possessed by the devil. So, they got exorcisms to coax the demains out. And drinking daisy juice was supposed to be a cure for bipolar disorder. You had to drink it for to weeks.I like your poem.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/26/2019 4:54:00 PM
Thank you Susannah. There are still those who think it is demon possession. Not me. Blessings, Susan
Date: 1/11/2019 10:59:00 PM
Susan, what a fantastic poem for your first one on PoetrySoup. I believe you have found your tribe. Welcome and thank you!
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/12/2019 9:41:00 AM
Thank you Caren! Glad to be a part of this tribe. :)
Date: 1/11/2019 2:04:00 PM
Heart rendering ink. Hugs
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/11/2019 10:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Maureen.

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