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Bhp ~ Bringing Her Pain

we have to restitch
the skin of this planet
having gouged 
and blown up 
all that is good


we have dug at 
her eyes
with no thought
for her 
or ourselves


we have literally
ripped the epidermis
from her back
as she screamed for mercy


we have to bring 
her edges together
and saying a million prayers 
we need to give thanks 
for all her glory


we have to leave her 
to heal and rest,
as the farmer 
repose’s the field
so does the jockey 
rest the horse


she too must sleep


for what we have done
in a hundred years
she will take a thousand
in the healing


she is broken and bleeding
her gush stains the planet
her silent screams 
are finally heard
but is it too little too late


her scars are seen from space


will she bleed out
and die taking us with her ?


its inevitable one day she will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 10:03:00 AM
Very thought provoking writing here Jayne. Have a beautiful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:01:00 PM
A well written poem. I to like to think about ecological and environmental concerns, thus I enjoyed this poem. However I do differ from the opinion expressed; "will she bleed out and die taking us with her," for the simple reason that I believe the earth will flourish long after the human race have become extinct, it will all go on if you get my drift, geological time allows the earth to constantly renew. Hard to imagine an earth without us isn't it. Thanks for this poem. Regards, Gavin.
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:23:00 AM
Oh well; now that will be rushing to Afghanistan because of the new discovery of gold. That one is really going to be interesting. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:30:00 PM
I do not always like how some non rhyming poets do their free verse. but i must say, I love your style and approach to free verse. YOu make it very lucid, which is what I love in a poem. VEry nice writing. LUv, Andrea
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