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Bffs - Never - Fallen

Best friends forever

               two bracelets, each with half a heart

      friendship ended when the tart stole my boyfriend

Tossed ~ one bracelet. Tossed ~ two friends who lost my respect. 



(For cousin Susan, who thought she had to steal everyone's boyfriend)

28 Words
November 30th 2015
Lin Lane
Fallen in 25-30 words contest
Host: nette onclaud

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Paul Callus Date: 12/5/2015 3:02:00 PM They certainly lost your respect, and friendship! Maybe a blessing in disguise! Congrats on this fine win, Lin. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/5/2015 3:10:00 PM Thank you very much, Paul. Definitely was a blessing.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/4/2015 9:43:00 PM Wonderful verse n win Lin.. big congrats! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/4/2015 11:20:00 PM Thanks a lot, Upma.

Skat A Date: 12/4/2015 8:14:00 PM Lin, sweet win--- SKAT Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/4/2015 11:20:00 PM Thanks, skat.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/4/2015 7:14:00 PM so glad this one made the list. BIG congrats to you. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/4/2015 7:16:00 PM Thank you for coming back, Andrea..you're so kind.

Rob Carmack Date: 12/4/2015 7:02:00 PM In the long run, they did you a favor. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/4/2015 7:12:00 PM Thank you, Rob. They certainly did.

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/4/2015 4:52:00 PM greeat piece, lin... good they are out of your life..sweet, fine congrats and thanks for joining my contest..huggs Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/4/2015 6:35:00 PM Thank you, nette. Good idea for a contest...thanks for hosting.

Jan Allison Date: 12/4/2015 4:31:00 PM good riddance to both of them Lin - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/4/2015 4:37:00 PM thanks Jan

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2015 6:01:00 PM This is great. Not what happened, but the clever way you did it, Lin. I likes it!! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/29/2015 6:04:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. Nice to see you..;)

Emile Pinet Date: 11/29/2015 12:13:00 PM This poem was cute, believable and just human enough to be easily relatable. Emile. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/29/2015 1:22:00 PM Thanks, I'm sure it's happened to lots of people...but not to me. lol sounds like a teenage problem.