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For Ink Empress' Pyramid Of Peace Poetry Contest

Beyond the Gloaming

I do not abide in bright sunlight. “I’m a vampire rose.” Recall last night when you first came upon me. You had wandered unknowingly into my woodland domain. Like a somnambulant delectable dreamer you walked into my succubus lair; you, with your scrumptious mouth and eyes. Beneath the lush tangle of myriad leafy boughs, I waited in shadows, hidden until you found me there. As you stood rooted to the forest floor admiring my blood red petals, your lust became my opportunity, for when you tried to pluck me up, you pricked your hand on my thorns. Did you not realize that was my plan? You bled, and then . . . you became my fledgling devotee. It was as if I had sunk fangs into your beautifully scrumptious pale neck. You have returned now longing to “kiss me when sun sleeps” for you are pulled by the mulberry mystery of my strange unnamed omnipotence. I am your goddess. No other rose can you ever find that will compare to me. Though you take up your quill and bleed poetry again and again, know this: “I own your signature.” Come, my lover I will blossom each night for you. You can caress me in the moonlight, but never can you clasp “your fingers around my soul.” Go look into the moon’s pool. Your reflection you will no longer see, and you will be drawn to me for as long as I shall desire you to be. My lover, my thrall, I have bestowed on you my cardinal immortality. Until I release you, your destiny is here - beyond the gloaming.
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Smith  Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 4:08 PM
Well written Andrea you have found the other you with such eloquence. Congratulations on your win.❤️🌹🏆
Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 1:12 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Beyond the Gloaming" write again. Have a blessed day with your win................
Anaya Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 2:15 PM
I love that Inks influence has brought your vampilicious "Come, my lover I will blossom each night for you. You can caress me in the moonlight, but never can you clasp “your fingers around my soul.” yalsa. Congratulations on your top win! 👍
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 2:47 PM
Thanks. Every once in a while I can kind of get into her style!
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 11:57 AM
~ love is trap!! I just said this to someone today! Lolol well he didnt agree! He said love is freedom! I disagree! Love is trap! Well I wish I can fave this over and over again! Something I could have written too! I felt this so very deeply! I dont have enough words to praise! But just know that youv nailed it 🌹🙌🥰✨⭐ Pleasure reading and placing this first! Congratulations ~ Sending you light always ✨🌙⭐
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 2:48 PM
Thanks so much. I had a lot of fun with this one
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 11:54 AM
Wow what even! How did you get in my head sweet Andrea! I cant even!!!🔥i am getting the feelings here! This is one of the best iv read for my prompts I must admit! I am in awe! I can see you were inspired! I am impressed! Especially love the lines “ I am your goddess. No other rose can you ever find that will compare to me. Though you take up your quill and bleed poetry again and again, know this: “I own your signature.”” Yesss!!!! 👏🙌🔥 say it louder! No one but you!!! Cus well love
Liguori Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 9:14 AM
Gosh you know how to love.
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 11:57 AM
Wat i said too lolol who knew
Onclaud Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 3:53 AM
ravishing way to let that creative steam out, andie...i love that luscious side of you!
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 9:26 PM
Thanks so much, Nette
Gibson Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:21 AM
"though you take up your quill and bleed poetry" ... I love that line and many others in this! Well done; I can see this at the top of the list.
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 9:26 PM
Thanks, Faye
Kerr Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 11:33 AM
Are breathtaking and beautiful the words I seek for this astonishing monumental free verse? Immaculate image rich composition. I love it, Andrea. Howard K
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 9:27 PM
Thanks so much
Scott Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 9:49 PM
Beaitiful imagary love the rhyme scheam xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 11:17 PM
thanks, David.
Kendrick Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 4:43 PM
Your style has changed somewhat in this dark contest entry. That is if it is, if so it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 4:50 PM
Just branching out. Like a vampire rose. Haha
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:46 PM
So well done! You really got into this one! Hugs ~ Kim
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:47 PM
Thanks. I hope it's not too over the top
Poet Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:14 PM
I really like your writing, Andrea. When I read your wonderful pieces, it is always a delight. Wishing you a fantastic day!
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:48 PM
Thanks. And back at ya
Goldsmith Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 12:03 PM
I enjoyed reading. "Beyond the Gloaming" is a wonderful write. Great Ending...  "Good Luck" I did, "Pyramid of Peace." - Artwork By Zdzislaw Beksinski. Have a lovely day writing away............
DiMino Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 12:02 PM
"Go look into the moon’s pool. Your reflection you will no longer see," -- Talk about being captured, totally owned. Great writing, Andrea. Always a pleasure to read you fine works. Have a great day!
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:47 PM
Thanks, Joe
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