Beyond the Garden Gate

Ornate is the ironwork that I peer through
as my fingers grasp the garden gate,
and I open my eyes to my Wonderland.

My bare feet step down the moonlit path,
where fireflies twinkle amongst the stars
that reflect upon the flowing crystal brook.
I capture them in a lantern, then set them free.
My lavender dress twirls weightlessly as I dance,
here I am free to feel joy and to dream.

Here beyond the gate of my enchanted garden,
when the golden sun sets low in the evening sky,
the daisies, gladiolas, and pansies never close their petals
and the sunflowers shine in the moonbeams.

While butterflies stay to perch on the blooming trellis,
the song of the hummingbird fills the warm night air
and I fall asleep in my flower bed of thorn-less roses.






Written by: Kelly Deschler
February 17th, 2014
For Nette Onclaud's contest - "My Secret Garden"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Way to go in the garden win..Congrats..Sara..Imaginative work..
Deschler Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 8:19 PM
Thank you for the congrats, Sara. I appreciate it very much!
Johnson Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 11:05 PM
It seems there are no weeds in your garden. Wish I knew your secret. I pulled tons of wild buttercup today. Congratulations on a great entry and win. Love, Joyce
Deschler Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 11:49 PM
I have just been very lucky, but there are still a few weeds in my garden, especially when those dandelions pop up out of nowhere! Thank you so much for your nice comments, Joyce!
May Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Wonderful write ...congrats on your win
Deschler Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Thank you for the nice comments, Joseph!
Lee Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 8:15 AM
I just love your descriptions here, Kelly! Congratulations on your win!
Deschler Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Thank you so much, Lisa!
Mehta Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Kelly
Deschler Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 12:56 AM
Thank you for the nice comments, once again. I appreciate it very much!
Hamilton Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 3:51 AM
a wondrous vision of peace Kelly congrats on win hugs
Deschler Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 12:15 AM
Thank you so much for the nice comments, Shadow!
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May 15, 2014 at 2:03 AM
Hi Kelly, Congratulations, on your winning poem... Thank you for the lovely garden, every poem, was wonderful, and amazing. Take a trip, and enjoy my latest blog "Midnight Garden." If you'd like... Always ~LINDA~
Mohammed Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 5:49 PM
I thought this was dreamy. This poem did it for me. Imagery upon imagery that floats effortlessly along the page. Lovely work here my friend.
Deschler Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Thank you very much, my friend! That means a lot coming from such a talented poet like yourself. :)
Melugin Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Kelly, A beautiful tour for me. A poetic paradise! 7 my best, chuck
Deschler Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 7:06 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comments, Chuck! I do appreciate you taking the time to stop by and read my poem. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Kelly I love the ambiance in this, though I have never seen a firefly, don't have them in the Uk I think...David
Deschler Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 11:19 PM
Thank you very much, David! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. It would be a shame if you didn't have fireflies in the UK, because they are a wonderful sight to behold! :)
Mehta Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 3:46 AM
Fine view of lovely garden and congrats on the win, Kelly
Deschler Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram! Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Jones Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 7:15 PM
Congratulations on your win..
Deschler Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 5:46 PM
Thank you very much, Donna!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 5:44 PM
I am enchanted my dear, lovely! Congratulations.
Deschler Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Thank you very much, Richard! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Guzzi Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 4:45 PM
A lovely twirling dance through all the sweet sights we are given. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Deschler Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Thank you so much, Debbie! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 3:24 PM
so gently rendered in a most descriptive way , kelly... congrats on your fine win in my contest!.. huggs"
Deschler Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Thank you so much, Nette! It is truly an honor to place in one of your contests. And, this was an enjoyable one to write for. Hugs :)
Tacito Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 7:10 AM
Who in the world wouldn't want to be in a place this soothing, yet incredible? Stunning atmosphere, capturing the innocence we all miss. Excellent!
Deschler Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Thank you so much, Drake! That is the most wonderful thing about being a writer. Through our words, we can time travel and revisit and relive any place or event that we wish to. And, we can take everyone with us! :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 5:11 AM
Enjoyed reading your enchanted garden..Reads like winning material to me..Sara
Deschler Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 5:28 PM
Thank you very much for stopping by, Sara! I always appreciate your encouraging comments. :)
Melugin Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Kelly, you wrote this to the nines! Beautiful Chuck
Deschler Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 4:55 PM
Thank you so much, Chuck! To be honest, I was worried that maybe I went a little overboard when I wrote this one. I wondered if I should have toned it down a bit, but it has gotten some good comments, so I guess I will leave it as is. :) Thank you for stopping by, once again!
Pettit Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 7:07 PM
Nicely written Kelly. I'm sure Nette will like this entry.
Deschler Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 10:04 PM
Thank you very much, Robert! I appreciate you stopping by to read and comment on my poem. :)
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