Chetta Achara Poet Rhyme

Beyond Sunset

I won't go out in this day's mess
Until my hair in golden tress
Is braided neatly, oh, so sweetly.

Come to me at break of dawn,
Or when the day is nearly drawn
In my seclusion of delusion.

Please make believe with me
And sail away on endless sea,
Beyond sunset and beyond regret.

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Hilda Greenhough April 13, 2024 at 10:52 PM It sounds like a fairytale sail on the sea. It is a 'just do it' moment.

Ink Empress April 13, 2024 at 2:19 PM So beautiful, as i read this i thought of norah jones, not sure if you know her but, the flow of your rhymes and the soothing manner youv delivered this is so very calming and lyrical like a song ill listen to on repeat! Pleasure reading this! Chetta Achara April 13, 2024 at 5:14 PM Thank you. I know of Norah Jones, and I know I like some of her songs when I hear them, but I am terrible when it comes to matching songs to their singer. You comment is high praise indeed. I am humbled.