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Beyond Faith

BEYOND FAITH
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at twilight’s edge
   love crochets a soft, trailing lace
           at twilight’s edge…
        late dusk  fondles her angel cheeks


tracing navels of our first start
        beyond faith as one, we shall part
at twilight’s edge...




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contest: Brian Strand's You Chose Again
written by: nette onclaud

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/17/2011 7:01:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "You Choose Again" contest Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/15/2011 9:28:00 AM Congrats Nette luv on frist place win again so well deserved for this phenom poetry my friend..luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/14/2011 11:05:00 PM this is beautiful, Nette! Congrats. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 11/14/2011 5:58:00 PM Dreamy writing. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 11/14/2011 5:19:00 PM Beautiful gem Nette. Good to see it on the top the list. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/14/2011 3:15:00 PM My dear sweet Nette, first what an amazing entry, second your missed by me... luv Michael Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 11/14/2011 3:05:00 PM Awesome write,Nette.Congratulations on your win...keep on winning my friend... Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 11/14/2011 2:36:00 PM Wonderful Nette. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 7/27/2011 8:12:00 AM Awesome lines Nette! You're great! Best of luck for Dr. Ram's contest! Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 7/25/2011 11:54:00 PM At twilight edge...there is nette's wonderful Rondelet...at twilight edge... Soup mail, dear Nette, iols :) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/25/2011 3:09:00 PM another excellent poem from you.Best wishes. Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 7/25/2011 11:07:00 AM Twilight invites softness and you say it so well. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/24/2011 8:54:00 PM This is very beautiful. Way to do a pretty poem n the rondelet contest. Login to Reply

Ashley Plotczyk Date: 7/24/2011 7:25:00 PM Lovely. :) Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 7/24/2011 4:54:00 PM nicely done, so much emotion in your words good luck in the contest,cory Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/24/2011 4:29:00 PM Thanks for the entry, nette Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/24/2011 4:20:00 PM much mentioned in short lines of beyond faith Nette luv.. good luck in contest with this brilliant beauty my friend... soup mail in a few..luv.. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/24/2011 10:16:00 AM A mesmerizing beauty from you nette.Very nice use of the form.Wishing u all the best. Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 7/24/2011 7:55:00 AM Nette, this is lovely. Twilight's edge...that almost there land. I like this image, very much. Hope it places high in Ram's contest. Speaking of contests, I do not see a picture in your hutain contest. Problem due to the repairs being done on this site? I'd like to dip into your challenge! Take care, hope your Sunday is long and lazy- Cyndi Login to Reply

Jun-Jun Villanueva Date: 7/24/2011 4:37:00 AM great. . . but i thought the refrained lines must be 4 syllable counts and the other must be 8. . .nevermind,. . .hehehehe. . .this piece is really amazing. . .a clever thought is portrayed and given life. . .a winner for me. . .*-* junjun " SMILE " ~~~~ Login to Reply