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Beyond Faith

BEYOND FAITH ) ) ) ) ) . . . at twilight’s edge love crochets a soft, trailing lace at twilight’s edge… late dusk fondles her angel cheeks tracing navels of our first start beyond faith as one, we shall part at twilight’s edge... all rights reserved ©rondeau . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . contest: Brian Strand's You Chose Again written by: nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 7:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "You Choose Again" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/15/2011 9:28:00 AM

Congrats Nette luv on frist place win again so well deserved for this phenom poetry my friend..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2011 11:05:00 PM

this is beautiful, Nette! Congrats.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/14/2011 5:58:00 PM

Dreamy writing. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 11/14/2011 5:19:00 PM

Beautiful gem Nette. Good to see it on the top the list. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/14/2011 3:15:00 PM

My dear sweet Nette, first what an amazing entry, second your missed by me... luv Michael

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/14/2011 3:05:00 PM

Awesome write,Nette.Congratulations on your win...keep on winning my friend...

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/14/2011 2:36:00 PM

Wonderful Nette. Congratulations on your win.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/27/2011 8:12:00 AM

Awesome lines Nette! You're great! Best of luck for Dr. Ram's contest!

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 7/25/2011 11:54:00 PM

At twilight edge...there is nette's wonderful Rondelet...at twilight edge... Soup mail, dear Nette, iols :)

Kash Poet

Date: 7/25/2011 3:09:00 PM

another excellent poem from you.Best wishes.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/25/2011 11:07:00 AM

Twilight invites softness and you say it so well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2011 8:54:00 PM

This is very beautiful. Way to do a pretty poem n the rondelet contest.

Ashley Plotczyk

Date: 7/24/2011 7:25:00 PM

Lovely. :)

Cory Long

Date: 7/24/2011 4:54:00 PM

nicely done, so much emotion in your words good luck in the contest,cory

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/24/2011 4:29:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/24/2011 4:20:00 PM

much mentioned in short lines of beyond faith Nette luv.. good luck in contest with this brilliant beauty my friend... soup mail in a few..luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 7/24/2011 10:16:00 AM

A mesmerizing beauty from you nette.Very nice use of the form.Wishing u all the best.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 7/24/2011 7:55:00 AM

Nette, this is lovely. Twilight's edge...that almost there land. I like this image, very much. Hope it places high in Ram's contest. Speaking of contests, I do not see a picture in your hutain contest. Problem due to the repairs being done on this site? I'd like to dip into your challenge! Take care, hope your Sunday is long and lazy- Cyndi

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/24/2011 4:37:00 AM

great. . . but i thought the refrained lines must be 4 syllable counts and the other must be 8. . .nevermind,. . .hehehehe. . .this piece is really amazing. . .a clever thought is portrayed and given life. . .a winner for me. . .*-* junjun " SMILE " ~~~~