Nette Onclaud Poet Rondeau

Beyond Faith

BEYOND FAITH
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at twilight’s edge
   love crochets a soft, trailing lace
           at twilight’s edge…
        late dusk  fondles her angel cheeks


tracing navels of our first start
        beyond faith as one, we shall part
at twilight’s edge...




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contest: Brian Strand's You Chose Again
written by: nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 17, 2011 at 7:01 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "You Choose Again" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 15, 2011 at 9:28 AM Congrats Nette luv on frist place win again so well deserved for this phenom poetry my friend..luv..

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2011 at 11:05 PM this is beautiful, Nette! Congrats.

Joyce Johnson November 14, 2011 at 5:58 PM Dreamy writing. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

John Freeman November 14, 2011 at 5:19 PM Beautiful gem Nette. Good to see it on the top the list. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico November 14, 2011 at 3:15 PM My dear sweet Nette, first what an amazing entry, second your missed by me... luv Michael

Olusegun Arowolo November 14, 2011 at 3:05 PM Awesome write,Nette.Congratulations on your win...keep on winning my friend...

Bob Quigley November 14, 2011 at 2:36 PM Wonderful Nette. Congratulations on your win.

Gert W. Knop July 27, 2011 at 8:12 AM Awesome lines Nette! You're great! Best of luck for Dr. Ram's contest!

Iolanda Scripca July 25, 2011 at 11:54 PM At twilight edge...there is nette's wonderful Rondelet...at twilight edge... Soup mail, dear Nette, iols :)

Kash Poet July 25, 2011 at 3:09 PM another excellent poem from you.Best wishes.

Elizabeth Wesley July 25, 2011 at 11:07 AM Twilight invites softness and you say it so well.

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2011 at 8:54 PM This is very beautiful. Way to do a pretty poem n the rondelet contest.

Ashley Plotczyk July 24, 2011 at 7:25 PM Lovely. :)

Cory Long July 24, 2011 at 4:54 PM nicely done, so much emotion in your words good luck in the contest,cory

Dr.Ram Mehta July 24, 2011 at 4:29 PM Thanks for the entry, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 24, 2011 at 4:20 PM much mentioned in short lines of beyond faith Nette luv.. good luck in contest with this brilliant beauty my friend... soup mail in a few..luv..

Kash Poet July 24, 2011 at 10:16 AM A mesmerizing beauty from you nette.Very nice use of the form.Wishing u all the best.

Cyndi Macmillan July 24, 2011 at 7:55 AM Nette, this is lovely. Twilight's edge...that almost there land. I like this image, very much. Hope it places high in Ram's contest. Speaking of contests, I do not see a picture in your hutain contest. Problem due to the repairs being done on this site? I'd like to dip into your challenge! Take care, hope your Sunday is long and lazy- Cyndi

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 24, 2011 at 4:37 AM great. . . but i thought the refrained lines must be 4 syllable counts and the other must be 8. . .nevermind,. . .hehehehe. . .this piece is really amazing. . .a clever thought is portrayed and given life. . .a winner for me. . .*-* junjun " SMILE " ~~~~