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Beyond Fair Reason Premiere Contest Winner

The shadowed door in candlelight so still An empty chair, a fading silhouette Of time forgot in love's unyielding will When flames to ash will trace the two who met 3/2/20 contest Rithimus Divisa 2 from the poem, A Kiss Remembered 12/31/18

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Date: 5/18/2020 1:22:00 PM
Hello Fredrick Parker, This could be a good memory or a sad one. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/16/2020 2:44:00 PM
A great choice for this contest, Federic. Your words are touching and the quatrain stands well alone as a poem of its own.
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Date: 4/24/2020 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win Frederic! I had to go and read your original that this came from. This is certainly deserving of your trophy. Beautiful! XX00
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Date: 4/23/2020 9:43:00 AM
'Frederic, Truly excellent! Well-deserved win. Keep up your excellent writing. David'
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Date: 4/21/2020 1:27:00 PM
Well done Frederic, I enjoyed this immensely! Congrats on a stunning first place!
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Date: 4/18/2020 11:09:00 AM
Frederic, this short snippet was enough to lure me to the whole poem. It is so beautifully composed and one which has been placed in my favourites to read again at leisure. Thank you.
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Date: 4/18/2020 10:39:00 AM
Ahhhh, such poignacy, Frederic. Congrats on your top spot!
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Date: 4/18/2020 8:42:00 AM
Wonderful poetic description of a lost love, Frederic. Well-deserved #1 win!
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Date: 4/18/2020 8:18:00 AM
I adore the shadowy-yet-romantic imagery you created here, Frederic, and it just plain spoke to me a bit more deeply than the rest of this marvelous group of poems - congrats on your deserving first place, my friend - blessings!
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