Beyond Earth--Instant Telegram

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beyond earth's vacuum... satellite wheel captures light of galactic forms Instant Telegram Contest, Nathan D. picture 1 2/19/2016

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David Waldrop

Date: 2/25/2016 4:59:00 PM

Very simplistic I like it nice one I'll read more of your work soon

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/19/2016 11:20:00 AM

Excellent my lovely friend. 7 and Good luck,bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/19/2016 8:54:00 AM

Throughout the stars, nette love the imagery..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/19/2016 1:41:00 AM

Great imagery nette... wonderful!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/18/2016 11:48:00 PM

Quite the cosmic image, Nette! I'm really digging the thought that went behind "beyond earth's vacuum" ... are you referring to the Hubble Space Telescope and how it captures such stellar images of different nebulae? That's what I got from this haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2016 6:30:00 PM

very cool, Nette. Is it nathan's contest. I focused on the mountain pic but I think I saw one about this too.

Carly Lalion

Date: 2/18/2016 4:19:00 PM

Your world transcends what is here on earth. An intergalactic union with all the stars just like us. Absolutely grand haiku!

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/18/2016 3:39:00 PM

The great beyond has puzzled mankind for centuries. Your poem reflects the beauty of your mind and the peace in your soul and compels one to look up at night and explore with their mind both inward and outward.