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Beyond a Trill

Along resplendent lanes in groves of green In sundown’s mellow tinge aglow, we cruise To grasp unto moon’s fingers so serene, Where we are charmed by lovebirds that amuse Who hum a rhapsody with lilting beats; Through gentle drones that seem to render blues Like first theme song we wish breaths could repeat-- Should we but fix past warmth beyond the sands The way a glossy mist embraces heat. A constant vow that ever understands Our mild and fragrant chiming of daybreak, As spirits abide on Aurora's hands. When birds flutter a trill, then ignite This dulcet paradise we leave to night! Alfredo Vassallo's Terza Rima by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/19/2014 1:51:00 AM
Nette very beautiful write my dear! U hv an amazing pen,, love the last two lines the most ,, awesome n heavenly! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/18/2014 10:31:00 AM
Nette,, A nice win....LINDA
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Date: 9/18/2014 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on this stunning poem. Just such a beautiful read Nette
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Date: 9/18/2014 7:12:00 AM
splendid musical painting, nette! Congrats
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Date: 9/18/2014 3:53:00 AM
Simply stunning Nette I love the way your words flow so beautifully:-) many congrats. hugs jan xxx
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Date: 2/10/2014 6:14:00 PM
awesome win...SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2014 9:34:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette, This is a very good poem....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 1/8/2014 11:43:00 PM
What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,nette
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Date: 1/8/2014 3:04:00 PM
Oh yes.....I love this tribute......a wonderful song it is........and your poem does it justice! Lovely as always....you never disappoint!
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Date: 8/16/2013 11:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win friend Nette...This is an excellent piece..your words are so deep and creative...just to let you know that I'm one of your fan :) Have a blessed weekend...hugs, Maria
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Date: 8/12/2013 6:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/11/2013 1:34:00 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2013 8:36:00 PM
Melodic and lovely Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:03:00 PM
well done Nette.... SKAT
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Date: 8/9/2013 4:32:00 PM
Hey, Girl, you did it again. Awesome win. And good to see you in top three here! Congrats.
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Date: 7/24/2013 5:14:00 AM
" Along resplendent lanes in groves of green In sundown’s mellow tinge aglow, we cruise To grasp unto moon’s fingers so serene" This is a very beautiful poem and you have captured a magnificent scenery.
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Date: 7/23/2013 7:51:00 AM
Nette. This is very rhythmical and beautiful. I think it will do well in Craig's contest. OH, and I love the title!!!
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Date: 7/22/2013 11:40:00 PM
Excellent. Nice poem. Enjoyed . Tfs
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Date: 7/22/2013 9:32:00 PM
This is a very nice poem and very relaxing to read. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.....Lucilla
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Date: 7/22/2013 9:03:00 PM
Craig will be spellbound by the splendor of this wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this masterpiece that you have so illustriously written! I just love the night, and you write so eloquently about it, awesome Work!!
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Date: 7/22/2013 8:43:00 PM
beautiful. good luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/22/2013 3:54:00 PM
Nette such magic flows in your poems. A fabulous write. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/22/2013 2:59:00 PM
I am sure that Craig will like this one..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my work..I appreciate your time spent there..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2013 2:45:00 PM
- ... the one beautiful after the other .... they come floating from your beautiful inner ... - Crossing my fingers ..... good luck!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/22/2013 1:49:00 PM
Yes! This was a bit of a journey here. A strong embrace of the nighttime skies. You have a thing for the night. Awesome. :)
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