Beyond a Trill

Along resplendent lanes in groves of green 	
  In sundown’s mellow tinge aglow, we cruise  
  To grasp unto moon’s fingers so serene,

  Where we are charmed by lovebirds that amuse
  Who hum a rhapsody with lilting beats;
  Through gentle drones that seem to render blues 

  Like first theme song we wish breaths could repeat--
  Should we but fix past warmth beyond the sands 
  The way a glossy mist embraces heat.

  A constant vow that ever understands
  Our mild and fragrant chiming of daybreak,
  As spirits abide on Aurora's hands.

  When birds flutter a trill, then ignite
  This dulcet paradise we leave to night!



 Alfredo Vassallo's Terza Rima
 by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 1:51 AM
Nette very beautiful write my dear! U hv an amazing pen,, love the last two lines the most ,, awesome n heavenly! Big congrats!
A   Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 10:31 AM
Nette,, A nice win....LINDA
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on this stunning poem. Just such a beautiful read Nette
De La Luna Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 7:12 AM
splendid musical painting, nette! Congrats
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 3:53 AM
Simply stunning Nette I love the way your words flow so beautifully:-) many congrats. hugs jan xxx
A  Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 6:14 PM
awesome win...SKAT
Horsch Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Congrats on your win Nette, This is a very good poem....Hugs....Roger
Mehta Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 11:43 PM
What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,nette
Richards Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Oh yes.....I love this tribute......a wonderful song it is........and your poem does it justice! Lovely as always....you never disappoint!
Liwayway Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 11:04 PM
Congrats on your win friend Nette...This is an excellent piece..your words are so deep and creative...just to let you know that I'm one of your fan :) Have a blessed weekend...hugs, Maria
Morgan Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Congrats on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 1:34 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
Johnson Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Melodic and lovely Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
A  Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 7:03 PM
well done Nette.... SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 4:32 PM
Hey, Girl, you did it again. Awesome win. And good to see you in top three here! Congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Nette. This is very rhythmical and beautiful. I think it will do well in Craig's contest. OH, and I love the title!!!
Sathasivam Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 11:40 PM
Excellent. Nice poem. Enjoyed . Tfs
Carrillo Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 9:32 PM
This is a very nice poem and very relaxing to read. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.....Lucilla
Sivey Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Craig will be spellbound by the splendor of this wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this masterpiece that you have so illustriously written! I just love the night, and you write so eloquently about it, awesome Work!!
Michelle Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 8:43 PM
beautiful. good luck in the contest!
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Nette such magic flows in your poems. A fabulous write. Warm Smiles, Connie
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 2:59 PM
I am sure that Craig will like this one..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my work..I appreciate your time spent there..Sara
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 2:45 PM
- ... the one beautiful after the other .... they come floating from your beautiful inner ... - Crossing my fingers ..... good luck!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Tacito Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Yes! This was a bit of a journey here. A strong embrace of the nighttime skies. You have a thing for the night. Awesome. :)
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