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Beyond a Blue Bay

beyond a blue bay beacons blinks a lullaby. . . tides' boulders slumber For the contest: "What My Eyes See" hosted by Annalise Brigham

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:30:00 PM

love the mix of alliteration in the haiku ..i will call it a AlitterKu

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/7/2012 4:17:00 PM

lovely alliteration Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:29:00 AM

Hello Andrea, This is beautiful. Congratulations on your win, As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2011 3:58:00 PM

So good to see you near the top, Andrea! Congratulations on your worthy poems 6th place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 3:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/27/2011 12:37:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Andrea. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 11:27:00 AM

Andrea,it's a great delight to read this wonderful Haiku again!Congrats on your win---kash

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2011 8:31:00 AM

Oh...love that last line especially....they do seem to be in slumber, with the covers pulled up!! love it! Congratulations, Andrea~ love C.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 8:20:00 AM

Love reading this dreamy haiku again, & so happy to share the place with you too :) hugs to you :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:28:00 AM

Congrats Andrea my friend on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write.. so happy to be sharing 6th place with one of the very best ... enjoy with luv ...sweets...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2011 7:11:00 AM

Magnificent image! Best wishes in Annalise's contest, Andrea. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/27/2011 5:39:00 AM

My congrats on your win, Andrea! Beautifu haiku!...And thank you for your kind comment1...Love, Gert

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/27/2011 3:13:00 AM

What a sweet image.many warm congrats for this success.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/26/2011 9:45:00 PM

Very soothing Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2011 8:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine 6th Place win in my contest, Andrea. Thanks for the support. Always, Annalise

James Tate

Date: 2/26/2011 8:28:00 AM

Andrea, this puts a lot in concise words. That takes thought and skill. Thanks for your observation of Three Blind men and a Horse. I had fun with that one.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 2/24/2011 1:40:00 PM

Wow a sure winner Andrea.Redone mine and done a syllable count on it.Sounds better thanks for the comment.~LUV~Teresa

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/24/2011 10:56:00 AM

I see it too. Your work is very descriptive as usual, Andrea.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2011 9:07:00 AM

if u have some time maybe u could read my new blog posted today.. explains much and good luck again in the new Haiku contest with this fabulous write luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/24/2011 6:17:00 AM

A stunning setting you have painted here Andrea, good luck for Annalise's contest, love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 5:05:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Andrea. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol P.S. SoupyMail

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/24/2011 2:20:00 AM

Amazingly soothing and words full of melody. Great imagination my friend. You have definitely created a Gem like Poem full of scenic beauty, Music and imagination. So beautiful. My good wishes for its success. And thanks for your precious comments on 'When the Earth was in danger'. Love and best wishes....Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/24/2011 12:17:00 AM

andrea, i like the creamy effect of this.... just stunning! win, win!..:) huggs, nette

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/23/2011 3:41:00 PM

Nide alliteration. J.R.R. Tolkien used alliteration a lot in his nattative verse you know. Have you gone to any readings recently. I often read my poetry to groups at poetry readings. Once in a while I even get paid to. This poem also reminds me of Blue Bayou - you know the Linda Ronstadt song. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish