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beyond a blue bay

beyond a blue bay beacons blinks a lullaby. . . tides' boulders slumber
For the contest: "What My Eyes See" hosted by Annalise Brigham

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Date: 5/16/2015 12:30:00 PM
love the mix of alliteration in the haiku ..i will call it a AlitterKu
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Date: 12/7/2012 4:17:00 PM
lovely alliteration Light & Love
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:29:00 AM
Hello Andrea, This is beautiful. Congratulations on your win, As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:58:00 PM
So good to see you near the top, Andrea! Congratulations on your worthy poems 6th place honored win! Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/27/2011 12:37:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Andrea. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:27:00 AM
Andrea,it's a great delight to read this wonderful Haiku again!Congrats on your win---kash
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:31:00 AM
Oh...love that last line especially....they do seem to be in slumber, with the covers pulled up!! love it! Congratulations, Andrea~ love C.
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:20:00 AM
Love reading this dreamy haiku again, & so happy to share the place with you too :) hugs to you :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:28:00 AM
Congrats Andrea my friend on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write.. so happy to be sharing 6th place with one of the very best ... enjoy with luv ...sweets...
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:11:00 AM
Magnificent image! Best wishes in Annalise's contest, Andrea. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2011 5:39:00 AM
My congrats on your win, Andrea! Beautifu haiku!...And thank you for your kind comment1...Love, Gert
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:13:00 AM
What a sweet image.many warm congrats for this success.
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:45:00 PM
Very soothing Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your very fine 6th Place win in my contest, Andrea. Thanks for the support. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:28:00 AM
Andrea, this puts a lot in concise words. That takes thought and skill. Thanks for your observation of Three Blind men and a Horse. I had fun with that one.
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Date: 2/24/2011 1:40:00 PM
Wow a sure winner Andrea.Redone mine and done a syllable count on it.Sounds better thanks for the comment.~LUV~Teresa
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Date: 2/24/2011 10:56:00 AM
I see it too. Your work is very descriptive as usual, Andrea.
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Date: 2/24/2011 9:07:00 AM
if u have some time maybe u could read my new blog posted today.. explains much and good luck again in the new Haiku contest with this fabulous write luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:17:00 AM
A stunning setting you have painted here Andrea, good luck for Annalise's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:05:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku Andrea. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol P.S. SoupyMail
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Date: 2/24/2011 2:20:00 AM
Amazingly soothing and words full of melody. Great imagination my friend. You have definitely created a Gem like Poem full of scenic beauty, Music and imagination. So beautiful. My good wishes for its success. And thanks for your precious comments on 'When the Earth was in danger'. Love and best wishes....Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich.
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Date: 2/24/2011 12:17:00 AM
andrea, i like the creamy effect of this.... just stunning! win, win!..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/23/2011 3:41:00 PM
Nide alliteration. J.R.R. Tolkien used alliteration a lot in his nattative verse you know. Have you gone to any readings recently. I often read my poetry to groups at poetry readings. Once in a while I even get paid to. This poem also reminds me of Blue Bayou - you know the Linda Ronstadt song. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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