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Blue Bay Hiku

beyond        a   blue  bay
beacons blink a lullaby. . . 
     the beach             slumbers

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JC Brul

May 19, 2025 at 5:50 AM

lovely haiku with delicate alliterations. Congratulations...^___^ JCB

Skat A

May 16, 2015 at 12:30 PM

love the mix of alliteration in the haiku ..i will call it a AlitterKu

Debbie Guzzi

December 7, 2012 at 4:17 PM

lovely alliteration Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 10:57 AM

Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

February 28, 2011 at 9:29 AM

Hello Andrea, This is beautiful. Congratulations on your win, As Always, Shar

John Freeman

February 27, 2011 at 3:58 PM

So good to see you near the top, Andrea! Congratulations on your worthy poems 6th place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

February 27, 2011 at 3:52 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

February 27, 2011 at 12:37 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Andrea. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

February 27, 2011 at 11:27 AM

Andrea,it's a great delight to read this wonderful Haiku again!Congrats on your win---kash

Carrie Richards

February 27, 2011 at 8:31 AM

Oh...love that last line especially....they do seem to be in slumber, with the covers pulled up!! love it! Congratulations, Andrea~ love C.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 27, 2011 at 8:20 AM

Love reading this dreamy haiku again, & so happy to share the place with you too :) hugs to you :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 27, 2011 at 7:28 AM

Congrats Andrea my friend on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write.. so happy to be sharing 6th place with one of the very best ... enjoy with luv ...sweets...

Carolyn Devonshire

February 27, 2011 at 7:11 AM

Magnificent image! Best wishes in Annalise's contest, Andrea. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

February 27, 2011 at 5:39 AM

My congrats on your win, Andrea! Beautifu haiku!...And thank you for your kind comment1...Love, Gert

Tahera Mannan

February 27, 2011 at 3:13 AM

What a sweet image.many warm congrats for this success.

Joyce Johnson

February 26, 2011 at 9:45 PM

Very soothing Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

February 26, 2011 at 8:46 PM

Congratulations on your very fine 6th Place win in my contest, Andrea. Thanks for the support. Always, Annalise

James Tate

February 26, 2011 at 8:28 AM

Andrea, this puts a lot in concise words. That takes thought and skill. Thanks for your observation of Three Blind men and a Horse. I had fun with that one.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

February 24, 2011 at 1:40 PM

Wow a sure winner Andrea.Redone mine and done a syllable count on it.Sounds better thanks for the comment.~LUV~Teresa

Robert Pettit

February 24, 2011 at 10:56 AM

I see it too. Your work is very descriptive as usual, Andrea.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 24, 2011 at 9:07 AM

if u have some time maybe u could read my new blog posted today.. explains much and good luck again in the new Haiku contest with this fabulous write luv..

Wilma Neels

February 24, 2011 at 6:17 AM

A stunning setting you have painted here Andrea, good luck for Annalise's contest, love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 24, 2011 at 5:05 AM

Beautiful Haiku Andrea. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol P.S. SoupyMail

Ravindra K Kapoor

February 24, 2011 at 2:20 AM

Amazingly soothing and words full of melody. Great imagination my friend. You have definitely created a Gem like Poem full of scenic beauty, Music and imagination. So beautiful. My good wishes for its success. And thanks for your precious comments on 'When the Earth was in danger'. Love and best wishes....Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich.