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Bluebells and butterflies await beyond a rusted busted gate

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James Tate

Date: 11/11/2016 5:57:00 PM

Andrea your poem here is almost beyond short. But I know a shorter one--Fleas, Adam had 'em. Thanks for following me. What does that entail? jt

Kash Poet

Date: 11/11/2016 12:27:00 PM

Very good Monoku.Nicely done.Best wishes.

James Inman

Date: 11/11/2016 7:35:00 AM

What a sweet thought filled line.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/10/2016 9:31:00 AM

I get a picture of a quaint country cottage just beyond. Love this one. Love, daver

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/10/2016 7:34:00 AM

Oh my. I just love this monoku. A beautiful poem regardless of its size. Exactly how you make this form work. A huge fav!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/10/2016 6:12:00 AM

Grand and beautiful:) I love the hope it brings:)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/10/2016 1:48:00 AM

This could be a beginning of a story.. very nice

Jennifer Walker

Date: 11/9/2016 6:23:00 PM

This is not what you told me over the phone, this is much better. I love the contrast of this one. With the beauty and neglect.

Judy Ball

Date: 11/9/2016 5:27:00 PM

Very nice Andrea. It reminds me of the field just outside our gate back on the farm filled with wild flowers and scrub grass. God Bless and a seven from me. JB