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Bewitching Blue

Hold still my little blue, for I know you are ready to explode I shall extract your exuberant energy with vibrancy and vigor For my palettes drip with desire of your aura feeding the white As the emptiness is slowly fed the eternal sky magically manifests Such joy and exaltations, we can now see forever thru dimensions The oceans divinely dance with your prismatic overtones shimmering Without warning the calamitous clouds creep in, we feel your wrath With treachery and collusion, we are thrown into the vastness voids No escape from the nefarious never as the barren bitter cold stings A bubonic blue surrounds the lachrymal landscapes of frozen tears Thru minds of men your rage runs rampant destroying hemispheres For me you are the light of day and the shade of sorrow, you are Blue. Jan.05.2019 Blue Poetry Sponsored by: Craig Cornish Placed 8'th...Thank You

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Date: 1/13/2019 8:51:00 AM
I'm looking at this once again and realize this is wonderful poetic writing that could have been higher. You used alliteration creatively with an important message but I think the presentation distracted me (layout etc.)---but- you still deservedly won!
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Date: 1/12/2019 5:13:00 PM
Blue is Breathtaking!! Yes, it's true. Congratulations my dear friend, on this win. Love with moments of Blue. :) Brandy
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Date: 1/11/2019 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations for your great win WW :)
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:55:00 PM
powerfully penned WW and I love your use of alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, WW. Beautifully penned.
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:23:00 PM
Just as I expected another great one W.W. love ya back my friend
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Date: 1/11/2019 2:34:00 PM
Love the way you addressed your poem to "Blue" and employed personification, WW. Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/9/2019 2:04:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, W.W. ... this is like a personal charisma and energy :) - (emotionally) - the colors are brilliant :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/7/2019 7:21:00 AM
Ooh, that's very good; good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/6/2019 1:47:00 PM
Oh dear W.W, Your poem is good, And quite understood, Wow, blue is blue, Could win the contest for you! Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/5/2019 11:13:00 PM
To be the light of day, a shadow of blue- all at the same time. Oh my!!! That is truly intense and I love it. This is so magical and mesmerizing. Your words shine!! Love and Light my Warrior with Wings. :) Brandy
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Date: 1/5/2019 11:32:00 AM
Wow , great one WW! With powerful ending too . Good luck in the contest. Happy New Year :)
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Date: 1/5/2019 10:21:00 AM
A thousand shades of blue....We'll done WW...Happy 2019
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Date: 1/5/2019 9:30:00 AM
This is beautiful... Blue comes with its unique touch.. Blue is plain in a sophisticated perception...Blue is beautiful, blue is simply blue.. Happy 2019
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Date: 1/5/2019 9:25:00 AM
Great take on the contest WW....
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