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Bewitching

How come you hold the key To the Eden's apple and gra-vity You allure me in like a meteor in space And scrumptious is thy Apple's taste Just as Eve, I couldn't resist your charm As Your aura feels at home and warm Like the Earth I hover in the space around And like the sun's pull, you keep me gladly bound So here I stand, ___ over the Moon..!! Content ____ within your enchanting cocoon ~ _______________________ ~

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 4/1/2023 4:46:00 PM

Note: Titled changed from ENCHANTMENT to BEWITCHING.

Ann Foster

Date: 8/1/2022 12:13:00 PM

Wonderful fun. Ann

Susan Lawrence

Date: 7/26/2022 7:12:00 AM

Paghunda, I love this journey with you filled with mystery and magic ! Let’s fly together . Beautiful! Hugs, Susan :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/6/2023 10:59:00 PM

Thanks Susan. I am honoured. Blessings!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/25/2022 2:22:00 PM

Hi Paghunda, once more your creativity comes to the fore. You take us far above to the celestial with your wonderful words. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/26/2022 5:30:00 AM

My pleasure

Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2022 2:16:00 PM

Enchanting poem, Paghunda. I like poem that are about the universe and thing greater than man. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill p.s. Thanks for following my poetry. :-)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/26/2022 5:30:00 AM

Thanks

Timothy Ray

Date: 7/2/2022 7:27:00 AM

absolutely bewitching.....and nothing more need be said

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/15/2022 9:16:00 AM

Thank you Timothy...

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/22/2022 1:33:00 AM

Me too, love the blending of a very creative poem.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/15/2022 9:16:00 AM

My pleasure

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/22/2022 1:15:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me delight virtually and poetically over your enchanting muse. God bless you.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/26/2022 5:59:00 AM

Thanks Austin

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2022 3:51:00 AM

Always a pleasure to see somebody happily enchanted, Paghunda! Kudos on your creativity. ~ Regards // paul

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/15/2022 9:16:00 AM

Thank you Paul

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/21/2022 1:17:00 AM

An enchanting verse, best for a win.

Valsa George

Date: 6/20/2022 10:28:00 PM

Very unique and highly original.... ! Congratulations on your prestigious win Paghunda, in the Marathon Poetry Contest

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/15/2022 9:16:00 AM

Thank you

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/20/2022 9:32:00 PM

Dear Paghunda, such beautifully expressed enchantment spills from your gifted pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/21/2022 3:58:00 AM

That's really kind of you

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/20/2022 3:55:00 PM

what a sweet original write, and so creative, gl in the contest dear P. xo

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/21/2022 3:58:00 AM

Thank you

Mark Toney

Date: 6/20/2022 11:40:00 AM

Greetings, Paghunda. I don't know if we've ever virtually met. :) Edward is right. I like this one. I love your wordplay using astronomy and physics: "Adam's apple and gra-vity" in the first stanza, "apple" in the first two stanzas, "meteor in space" and "over the moon" and "enchanting cocoon" at the end. It's fun and fills me with ... well, "Enchantment!" Congratulations on your win on Mile 3 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 4 has already started!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 3:16:00 PM

Thank you Mark.. And yeah Astronomy and physics are my favourite and I often use these in my poetry... Thank you for considering this one Mark.. Humbled

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/19/2022 1:58:00 PM

Beautifully done, Paghunda:-) I think Mark will like this one!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 3:15:00 PM

Thanks