Bewitching

How come you hold the key
To the Eden's apple and gra-vity

You allure me in like a meteor in space
And scrumptious is thy Apple's taste

Just as Eve, I couldn't resist your charm
As Your aura feels at home and warm

Like the Earth I hover in the space around
And like the sun's pull, you keep me gladly bound

So here I stand, ___ over the Moon..!!
Content ____ within your enchanting cocoon!
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Zahid Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 4:46 PM
Note: Titled changed from ENCHANTMENT to BEWITCHING.
Foster Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 12:13 PM
Wonderful fun. Ann
Lawrence Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 7:12 AM
Paghunda, I love this journey with you filled with mystery and magic ! Let’s fly together . Beautiful! Hugs, Susan :)
Zahid Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 10:59 PM
Thanks Susan. I am honoured. Blessings!
Raven Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Hi Paghunda, once more your creativity comes to the fore. You take us far above to the celestial with your wonderful words. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike.
Zahid Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 5:30 AM
My pleasure
Baker Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 2:16 PM
Enchanting poem, Paghunda. I like poem that are about the universe and thing greater than man. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill p.s. Thanks for following my poetry. :-)
Zahid Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 5:30 AM
Thanks
Ray Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 7:27 AM
absolutely bewitching.....and nothing more need be said
Zahid Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Thank you Timothy...
Horsman Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 1:33 AM
Me too, love the blending of a very creative poem.
Zahid Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 9:16 AM
My pleasure
Agustin Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 1:15 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me delight virtually and poetically over your enchanting muse. God bless you.
Zahid Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 5:59 AM
Thanks Austin
Callus Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 3:51 AM
Always a pleasure to see somebody happily enchanted, Paghunda! Kudos on your creativity. ~ Regards // paul
Zahid Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Thank you Paul
Buhagiar Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 1:17 AM
An enchanting verse, best for a win.
George Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 10:28 PM
Very unique and highly original.... ! Congratulations on your prestigious win Paghunda, in the Marathon Poetry Contest
Zahid Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Thank you
Ashley Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 9:32 PM
Dear Paghunda, such beautifully expressed enchantment spills from your gifted pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Zahid Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 3:58 AM
That's really kind of you
Rose  Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 3:55 PM
what a sweet original write, and so creative, gl in the contest dear P. xo
Zahid Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 3:58 AM
Thank you
Toney Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 11:40 AM
Greetings, Paghunda. I don't know if we've ever virtually met. :) Edward is right. I like this one. I love your wordplay using astronomy and physics: "Adam's apple and gra-vity" in the first stanza, "apple" in the first two stanzas, "meteor in space" and "over the moon" and "enchanting cocoon" at the end. It's fun and fills me with ... well, "Enchantment!" Congratulations on your win on Mile 3 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 4 has already started!
Zahid Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 3:16 PM
Thank you Mark.. And yeah Astronomy and physics are my favourite and I often use these in my poetry... Thank you for considering this one Mark.. Humbled
Ibeh Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Beautifully done, Paghunda:-) I think Mark will like this one!
Zahid Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 3:15 PM
Thanks
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