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Bewitched

Ageless and amazingly, the nerves sing, butterflies flutter within the begin like the bowed tension of a cello’s string. Let the trailing flow of sweet kisses sting. Pain so close to passion, adrenaline, ageless and amazingly, the nerves sing. Nipping ear and throat so breathtaking, as we fall and roll on the white bear skin like the bowed tension of a cello’s string. Peacock feathers trace the grace amazing, flames dance high on the walls of the cabin ageless and amazingly, the nerves sing. Double backed, we ride through the heat lightning. in the firelight her eyes are fetchin’ like the bowed tension of a cello’s string. My wife, my life, my so happy ending, who but thee could there be so bewitchin’? Ageless and amazingly, the nerves sing, like the bowed tension of a cello’s string.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/5/2013 7:41:00 PM
Debbie, ;-) Congratulations with Anne's Favorite Poetry Form: Villanelle! Have yourself a good one. always & forever*LINDA
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Date: 4/4/2013 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your nice winning poem
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Date: 4/2/2013 10:51:00 AM
great job Debbie, congrats on your win
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Date: 4/1/2013 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/1/2013 3:17:00 PM
congrats again, Deb. it is still amazing!
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Date: 4/1/2013 3:09:00 PM
This is exceptional Debbie, mind you I would expect nothing less. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:42:00 PM
An excellent poem, Deborah. Quite an amazing villanelle. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:46:00 PM
Great entry and a worthy win. Enjoy your winnings. keep up the great work. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:14:00 AM
This poem is just amazing. Like the bowed tension on a cello's string, fantastic metaphor. Full of passion and need to satisfy. Love this.
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:35:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest with this magnificent piece .. a brilliant write and win for u to enjoy my TEACH... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..watching fireworks at 3 a.m....AlohA...
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:11:00 AM
A timeless treasure, this lovely Villanelle, Deborah. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:29:00 AM
great imagery, Deb. Congrats on your SUPER win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:11:00 PM
Congratulations Deborah, on your poem's success in the competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:38:00 PM
Congrats on the 3rd place win in my contest.
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:14:00 PM
Great poem Deborah and congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/14/2010 10:36:00 PM
truly an intriguing piece and a wonderful villanelle for sure,,wishing you the best in the contest, with your talented write,,and Thank You for reading my words and leaving such sweet words behind,,,Blessings..Cecil PS soup mail
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Date: 6/12/2010 7:25:00 AM
Lovely poem, Deborah! Wish you best of luck in the contest and thank you for your welcome comments..Have a great weekend con grande gioia!! Love, Gert
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Date: 6/11/2010 4:32:00 PM
Quite lovely TEACH..and good luck in Dr. Ram's contest... a super duper entry.. and graceful words abound... luv the heat lightening..but u knew that right? pupil..luv..
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Date: 6/11/2010 10:04:00 AM
as the cello ages so does the art of making love. and every old cello ripens with age -- alan
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Date: 6/10/2010 8:46:00 PM
You really put this together well. I hope it wins for you. Charles
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Date: 6/10/2010 7:20:00 PM
style, art, grace, if space allowed, words of praise unending for such a classic....blown-away....to call it my fav scratches but the surface....
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:26:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest.
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Date: 6/10/2010 4:45:00 PM
such a sweet write, enjoyed...smiles:)
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