Beware

*****BEWARE ~ reads the file***** Love struck mothers in denial while the Pedophile robs the innocent child Lay

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/19/2011 5:17:00 AM

right in line with your grace filled callling to bring attention to these matters for the good of all, dear Lay. It grabbed my heart.Our precious children of all ages thank you. Thank you for your comment and you betcha -- I've missed you too. been busy makin a livin'! Keep on writing, Lay!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/18/2011 2:37:00 PM

Soup Mail!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2011 11:09:00 PM

I just remembered. "Precious", with Mo'nique!! This made me think of that, except that the mother was hardly love struck in the end of that movie!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2011 11:07:00 PM

This is a powerful one and so sadly true. Did you see that movie a while back? DArn, the title of it totally escapes me now. It starred some famous black actresses and was a highly reccomended movie on child abuse by Oprah Winfrey (I just know that title is going to pop into my mind the minute I go to sleep tonight. Why can't I think of it?? )

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/17/2011 7:42:00 PM

this we even deny to ourselves because our minds can not comprehend untill enough people say the horrorable thing out loud. john

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/17/2011 10:31:00 AM

Many mothers do seem to look away when lovers endanger their children, Lay. So much said in such a short verse. Excellent and powerful message! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/17/2011 7:31:00 AM

Awesome words Lay .. an out of control dilemma ... beware is so true .. amazing message my friend..thankxx..luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/17/2011 7:26:00 AM

oh dear lay, do some mothers really deny such heinous things?? a searing write! thanks for thsi striking piece... :) hugggs, nette