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Betwixt the Moon In June

God, make your shanty in my room I firmly fathom, what's your doom Your handle caused a million streams Moonlight that bliss, within my dreams Among moon insight, we'll resume
8th Place Contest Winner Written: June 9, 2022 The Moon in June (Choose One of Five Forms) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 6/15/2022 11:38:00 AM
Lasaad my friend, what a wonderful poem and congratulations are so deservedly due, not that I'm surprised, your poems rock! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/14/2022 4:01:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Lasaad. beautiful poem and intriguing picture. Bill
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Date: 6/14/2022 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/picture. Wish I had the picture. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 6/13/2022 10:22:00 PM
You have approached the subject from an altogether different angle. Congratulations on your win, dear friend !
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Date: 6/13/2022 12:14:00 AM
i enjoyed the message in this quintilla, Lasaad. thanks for your participation and congrats in my contest.
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Date: 6/11/2022 9:15:00 AM
Enlightening, my friend, Lasaad. Be blessed !
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Date: 6/10/2022 5:15:00 AM
Longing for divinity--blissful thoughts, Lasaad.
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