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Betwixt the Moon In June

God, make your shanty in my room
I firmly fathom, what's your doom
Your handle caused a million streams 
Moonlight that bliss, within my dreams
Among moon insight, we'll resume

8th Place Contest Winner

Written: June 9, 2022

The Moon in June (Choose One of Five Forms) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Jennifer Proxenos June 15, 2022 at 11:38 AM Lasaad my friend, what a wonderful poem and congratulations are so deservedly due, not that I'm surprised, your poems rock! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Bill Baker June 14, 2022 at 4:01 PM Congrats on the win, Lasaad. beautiful poem and intriguing picture. Bill

Paula Goldsmith June 14, 2022 at 12:18 PM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/picture. Wish I had the picture. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Valsa George June 13, 2022 at 10:22 PM You have approached the subject from an altogether different angle. Congratulations on your win, dear friend !

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2022 at 12:14 AM i enjoyed the message in this quintilla, Lasaad. thanks for your participation and congrats in my contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 11, 2022 at 9:15 AM Enlightening, my friend, Lasaad. Be blessed !

Vijay Pandit June 10, 2022 at 5:15 AM Longing for divinity--blissful thoughts, Lasaad.