Betwixt Discovery and Scourge

Written: September 29, 2025, for contest sponsored by Tom Wood *********** I) Sojourn of the Alabaster Mind I careen through a world of chatoyant light, Each step is a mirror of halcyon lore. The pavonine sky and a chimera flight, Projects sage shadows on an Elysian shore. A clamor of atlas, a ductile tickle Elixir of wonder, still need to fickle— To pursue the penumbra, to not be blind, And a sojourn for the alabaster mind. II) The Necrotic Hour I maunder across the clangor of despair, A stertorous breath in the stygian gloom. No nepenthe soothes within egregious snare, Each cough is a pyrrhic echo in my room. The airhead mocks my once-mellifluous breath My Oculus dims in sudden fever death. No eloquence lives in this loathsome abyss— My nemesis: the sickness can't be sheer bliss.
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Jones Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 7:13 PM
Wow what a journey into brilliance with words! Congrats on your win!
Carmack Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 8:42 AM
I am currently reading a translation of Calvin's "Institutes of the Christian Religion". I think Calvin would have liked your style of poetry.
Carmack Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 6:34 AM
Book First - Chapter 9 - All the principles of Piety subverted by fanatics, who substitute revelations for scripture. Like certain charismatic church leaders today who 'hear' from God. My favorite, Kenneth Copeland stating he made a convenant with God to live to 120 years old.
Poet Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 9:12 AM
Dear Rob, that’s an incredibly generous comparison—thank you. Calvin’s Institutes are a masterwork of theological clarity and conviction. If my poetry stirs even a fraction of that depth, I’m honored. What part of the Institutes are you reading now?”
Guptar Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations, poet friend, on your win in this contest with a superb poem , as usual, showcasing a masterly diction and choosy rhymes, depicting the voyage of your mind through sparkling light and the stygian gloom. Wising you a delightful weekend.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Lovely words that roll off the tongue. Too many to look up but seems well done.
George Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 5:35 AM
Wow... another marvel of creation! Who can vie with your vocabulary! Caught between two extremes, life is an unresolved puzzle. 'pavonine sky, elixir of wonder, stertorous breath, clangor of despair, chatoyant light'----these expressions are just matchless!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:58 PM
another masterpiece! You continue to wow me with your writing voice and vocabulary--each of which makes for truly unique poetry. I like your perception and take on the contest...
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 11:40 AM
What a creative write you have here. I enjoyed reading. "Good Luck" I am not sure I did mine right. Have a fun day writing away..........
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