Betwixt

She was a faerie an elfin a creature of the land living in harmony with the universe the forest in her element her nesting ground a magical being transient reluctantly crossing over dragged down falling off the edge a misadjusted weight drowning gasping for air a fish out of water who didn’t fit in or belong in our realm AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on January 16, 2021 for contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(41) ANY THEME ANY FORM sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 10TH Originally posted on October 3, 2019

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Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/5/2019 3:34:00 PM

This is sad, but breathtakingly beautiful at the same time... brilliantly penned! A FAV!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2019 6:13:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and most appreciated compliment, Rhona. This is about a special person I knew a long time ago.

Hello There

Date: 10/3/2019 10:53:00 PM

Another cool write, though sad... Pick her up, my friend, and care for her. Will you? We all get lost sometimes...

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2019 6:14:00 PM

Hello There, thanks for your lovely visit and most appreciated comment.