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Betwixt

She was a faerie
an elfin
a creature of the land
living in harmony
with the universe
the forest
in her element
her nesting ground
a magical being
transient
reluctantly
crossing over
dragged down
falling off the edge
a misadjusted weight
drowning
gasping for air
a fish out of water
who didn’t fit in
or belong
in our realm



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on January 16, 2021 for contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(41) ANY THEME ANY FORM sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 10TH

Originally posted on October 3, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/5/2019 3:34:00 PM
This is sad, but breathtakingly beautiful at the same time... brilliantly penned! A FAV!
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Date: 10/5/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and most appreciated compliment, Rhona. This is about a special person I knew a long time ago.
Date: 10/3/2019 10:53:00 PM
Another cool write, though sad... Pick her up, my friend, and care for her. Will you? We all get lost sometimes...
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Date: 10/5/2019 6:14:00 PM
Hello There, thanks for your lovely visit and most appreciated comment.

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