Between Us

Sometimes, it’s the way the light falls  
in the quiet hours,  
when the day is almost gone,  
and the shadows stretch out like secrets  
waiting to be whispered.  

It’s the soft hum of a song  
that plays only between us,  
the unspoken understanding  
that we don’t need to say everything  
to know everything.  

I’ve never wanted for much  
more than this:
the way you laugh when you’re not trying,  
how your eyes find mine across a room,  
the way the world feels  
a little softer,  
a little slower,  
when you’re near.  

There are no promises,  
no grand gestures,  
just this quiet knowing  
that some things  
don’t need words to be real.  

Maybe that’s the way it should be,  
how the best things
are never loud,  
but simply…  
here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 11/25/2024 1:54:00 PM
So true dear Garty, couldnt have said it any better, youv expressed very well here how sometimes words are not needed for something to be real, just because one doesnt say it out loud, doesnt make it any less real, as actions and feelings shared in silence too can reach when aligned. I love the line “ the unspoken understanding that we don’t need to say everything to know everything. “ beautiful poem. Well delivered. Congratulations on your placement
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Date: 11/25/2024 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations Garty! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud of your accomplishment. There were so many good poems submitted, yet your poem caught my eye. Well done, my friend Emile.
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