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Between Shells

up the hill so I can see you tootle-ha and wielding your smile from dawn to twilight waving tootle-loo in valley I can touch your flesh eat you up with you sup my buttercup of moonshine no need to move lips in your arms can hear chest beating and the roar of the sea as your lips slip between shells and the sun melts me up on top you look down at me I’m the town we’re grounded you are the undying wind of love’s moan and sigh

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Date: 7/25/2025 1:06:00 AM
Quite lovely Kim. l so wish l could write in these forms of poetry but my brain fog gets the better of me, but al least l can enjoy other poets works of art like yours. Thank you so much for sharing. Have great week end. J
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Date: 7/24/2025 3:52:00 AM
I haven't seen Shadorma form on in a while. Someone must be having a contest using the form. Thanks for sharing these with us. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2025 5:28:00 AM
Just having fun with it :) Thank you, Sara!
Date: 7/23/2025 7:45:00 PM
This is breathtaking, Kim! It's such a gift to read such poetry - I can count on every poem being so emotive and with loveliness, depth. Hugs <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2025 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! I so love writing! Write away, dear poet!
Date: 7/23/2025 6:16:00 PM
First poem I've read in this form, Kim. I liked it! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2025 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 7/23/2025 3:50:00 PM
beautifully crafted with a hint of romanticism. Loved it and this form. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2025 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! Good to try something different :)
Date: 7/23/2025 2:47:00 PM
Wonderfully crafted Kim. Enjoyed reading
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2025 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 7/23/2025 12:12:00 PM
Lovely!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2025 2:41:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!

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