Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Rhyme

Between Midnight and Dawn

Overcome by the peace in the midnight hour
Moonlight fills the otherwise velvet black sky
Twinkles of newness invade our senses from afar
The night so beautiful it causes us both to sigh

On our tropical island watching the trees sway
Love was captured between midnight and dawn
Bodies entwined the feeling took our breath away
Forever our nights under the moonlight will live on


For: *Gail Doyle's first contest*
"A Tropical Theme Under A Moonlight"
Written By: Carol Brown
03/15/2012
1st Place Winner

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Paul Schneiter July 26, 2014 at 6:55 AM This poem excels at creating a romantic mood. I think it's delightful. Exemplary composition, Carol.

John Castro May 18, 2013 at 10:34 PM 7up!!!!

Debbie Guzzi August 29, 2012 at 10:12 AM Excellent use of half rhyme! Very sophisticated. Light & Love

Tracy Marie Windisch Mason June 20, 2012 at 12:10 PM Dear Carol, Another beauty,your lines sparkle everytime!Best wishes,Tracy

John Castro June 5, 2012 at 5:45 AM wow sounds too good to be true

Samia Ali Salama May 30, 2012 at 1:18 PM Hey Carol, This poem is a great example of how with just a few lines, a beautiful scene can be created! This was lovely ...Samia

Tashi Gyeltshen May 24, 2012 at 4:14 AM a VERY FABULOUS POEM I should say Tashi Gyeltshen

David Scott May 10, 2012 at 11:35 AM I love the word combination afar and hour thank you for coments on mine Ive been so bissy Ive had no time to look at your poems are you on face book love to chat more about poetry maybe you could give me a few pointers x david scott

Ken Duddle April 20, 2012 at 12:13 PM That fits the topic well. I was drawn into the expeience.

Prakriti Palchoudhury April 19, 2012 at 7:27 AM A lovely poem!

Dillon Lewis April 5, 2012 at 3:27 PM this is nice :)

Debbie Duncan March 29, 2012 at 6:10 PM Oh,,, I love this,,, I can see/ read ;} why you won first place ;}stay blessed dear lady !

Leila Mijares March 27, 2012 at 6:13 AM So beautiful poem. Goodluck Carol!!! ^_^

Richard Mcclellan March 26, 2012 at 7:28 AM Love this work, I have a poem similar about the night sky. It's called "Starry Gaze" that you read... This piece reminded me of that one... lol, You have a good day Carol, God Bless!

Black Eyed Susan March 25, 2012 at 9:26 AM Congratulations on your win! somehow I missed this beauty! a lovely description :)

Don Johnson March 23, 2012 at 4:07 PM ah peace and sublime, and the red red wine, 2 lovers enthralled with their pact, great verse here babe...

Laurel Larison March 21, 2012 at 6:21 AM Oh this is wonderful. Great writing. I loved the verses. Congrats on winning for this poem. You are truly bless to be able to write such wonderful things.

Michelle Mac Donald March 20, 2012 at 2:23 PM Congratulations on the win of this lovely poem, Carol! Sounds like an enchanting trip to this paradise.:) Best wishes to you and yours, love, Mikki BTW...is that your bunny? It's looks so cute and sweet.

Richard Mcclellan March 20, 2012 at 7:25 AM Love this poem, it is similar to Winds of Passion in nature... lol

Judy Ball March 20, 2012 at 5:43 AM Beautiful description here Carol. Lovely wording. Excellent entry for the contest. God Bless and Congrats, JB

Don Johnson March 19, 2012 at 4:29 PM 1st place how sweet it is under a tropic sky, great piece of poetry that we don't deny...

Laura Breidenthal March 19, 2012 at 1:36 PM Awesome piece here. I absolutely loved it. Always, Laura

Harry Horsman March 19, 2012 at 11:46 AM and what a winner too, brilliant Carol. harry

Jack Horne March 19, 2012 at 6:55 AM Many congrats on your wins : ) Lovely write, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown March 19, 2012 at 6:51 AM Thank you all for comments and congrats. Thank you Gail for the placement. Love, Caro

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