Between Lines

Spaces full between lines full of dreams hopes memories Ordinary? No special smile speaking face to face longing for an embrace feeling a heart a soul needing comfort security pining to be heard beneath lines truths telling testimonies whispered with words Ordinary? No listen closely behind that special smile living between the lines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Eastman Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Interesting! I will be surpassed by you on the 'all time- Community points " list today or tomorrow. You have worked hard on your poetry and should be appreciated by more than this... Maybe a contest around you would be nice... Or you should have a contest of your own... Now... Just saying... You are on your way to famous... if you keep writting like you have... They are all thought proviking and sigh-able...
Andresen Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 3:55 PM
- There are always words between the lines ...... beautiful poem, Tim - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Muideen Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Your write swirl In the readers brain jaunt to spike their heart yet mystery in it. Excellence........A.M.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Sometimes between the lines the unseen and the unfelt are waiting to be seen and felt and by doing so the lines are filled with meaning, dear Tim! Imaginative!
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 11:43 PM
this is magical Tim, loved it!
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 10:09 PM
There is a world of mysteries between the lines.....lovely....
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 3:25 PM
we often need to read between the lines to be understood Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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