Daniel Turner Poet Quatrain

Between Happiness and Heartache

Between happiness and heartache
We search for higher ground
As we travel the peaks and valleys
Trying to save the love we've found

Build bridges over troubled waters
Carelessly burning a few
Following our map of dreams
Rest on ridges to enjoy the view

We try to avoid the slippery slopes
But occasionally roll the dice
Betting our fears and chancing our hope
Not to cover the same ground twice

We use our conscience, for a compass
Our hearts for compromise
If we share a bond of mutual trust
In the end our love will survive


   an original poem by the "Poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Darlene De Beaulieu November 10, 2016 at 6:57 PM I have just finished reading your poem and I like it.It is such a beautiful poem.I also rated this poem a 7 but to me it should be a 10

Sharon Gulley September 7, 2016 at 9:39 AM I have really enjoyed stopping by and reading today. There is nothing more beautiful than a man who can share in words his love, his hopes and dreams. I do believe you are one of my favorite poets Daniel. This beautiful write tells you why. A (7) for me and a fav. Sharon Daniel Turner September 8, 2016 at 11:08 AM Thank you, Sharon. You flatter me! I am glad you enjoyed your reading today. I have added you to my favs also:)

Joanna Daniel July 11, 2016 at 9:23 AM Great write:) true lines that touch the heart:) A#7:) Daniel Turner July 11, 2016 at 9:41 AM Thank you Jo. I appreciate your kindness and the high praise.

Jean Murray July 9, 2016 at 3:09 PM Who wants to live without taking a chance on love? Not me. Nor you Daniel. Daniel Turner July 11, 2016 at 9:40 AM Jean, anytime you choose to love someone, you're taking a chance. We all take that risk at some point. Think of the billions of people on this earth and knowing somewhere out there is someone just for you. Finding that one person is like playing the lottery.

Connie Marcum Wong July 9, 2016 at 3:15 AM Daniel...you have woven these famous sayings into a lovely coverlet that enhances their sensibilities. Beautiful! 7 ; ) Daniel Turner July 9, 2016 at 6:49 AM Thank you Connie. I appreciate your kindness and the lovely flowers.

Seren Roberts July 8, 2016 at 2:08 AM Great Daniel, if at first we don't succeed try try try again. This saying came to mind as I read it....Seren Daniel Turner July 8, 2016 at 10:53 AM Thank you Seren. Poetry is a form of art and can be interpreted many ways. I'm glad you stopped by and am grateful for your time and friendly comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2016 at 1:16 PM - Wonderful written Daniel, the last verse tells me that if we want .... we may share this earth with love - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Daniel Turner July 7, 2016 at 1:29 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. Yes, I believe love will prevail over hate. I really am glad you stopped by for a visit. I always enjoy your company:)

Sandra Haight July 7, 2016 at 12:48 PM Quite a journey you describe, Daniel. I like the metaphors you use on this road between happiness and heartache. Nicely written! 7 Sandra Daniel Turner July 7, 2016 at 1:26 PM Thank you Mrs Sandra, for the heart smile. I always look forward to your lovely visits.

Kim Merryman July 6, 2016 at 11:23 AM Inspirational! Smooth flowing and rhyme with a message the world needs to hear! I like it! Daniel Turner July 6, 2016 at 11:55 AM Thank you Kim. I appreciate your time and friendly comments.