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Between Happiness and Heartache

Between happiness and heartache We search for higher ground As we travel the peaks and valleys Trying to save the love we've found Build bridges over troubled waters Carelessly burning a few Following our map of dreams Rest on ridges to enjoy the view We try to avoid the slippery slopes But occasionally roll the dice Betting our fears and chancing our hope Not to cover the same ground twice We use our conscience, for a compass Our hearts for compromise If we share a bond of mutual trust In the end our love will survive an original poem by the "Poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/10/2016 6:57:00 PM

I have just finished reading your poem and I like it.It is such a beautiful poem.I also rated this poem a 7 but to me it should be a 10

Sharon Gulley

Date: 9/7/2016 9:39:00 AM

I have really enjoyed stopping by and reading today. There is nothing more beautiful than a man who can share in words his love, his hopes and dreams. I do believe you are one of my favorite poets Daniel. This beautiful write tells you why. A (7) for me and a fav. Sharon

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 11:08:00 AM

Thank you, Sharon. You flatter me! I am glad you enjoyed your reading today. I have added you to my favs also:)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/11/2016 9:23:00 AM

Great write:) true lines that touch the heart:) A#7:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/11/2016 9:41:00 AM

Thank you Jo. I appreciate your kindness and the high praise.

Jean Murray

Date: 7/9/2016 3:09:00 PM

Who wants to live without taking a chance on love? Not me. Nor you Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/11/2016 9:40:00 AM

Jean, anytime you choose to love someone, you're taking a chance. We all take that risk at some point. Think of the billions of people on this earth and knowing somewhere out there is someone just for you. Finding that one person is like playing the lottery.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2016 3:15:00 AM

Daniel...you have woven these famous sayings into a lovely coverlet that enhances their sensibilities. Beautiful! 7 ; )

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/9/2016 6:49:00 AM

Thank you Connie. I appreciate your kindness and the lovely flowers.

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/8/2016 2:08:00 AM

Great Daniel, if at first we don't succeed try try try again. This saying came to mind as I read it....Seren

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/8/2016 10:53:00 AM

Thank you Seren. Poetry is a form of art and can be interpreted many ways. I'm glad you stopped by and am grateful for your time and friendly comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2016 1:16:00 PM

- Wonderful written Daniel, the last verse tells me that if we want .... we may share this earth with love - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/7/2016 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Yes, I believe love will prevail over hate. I really am glad you stopped by for a visit. I always enjoy your company:)

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/7/2016 12:48:00 PM

Quite a journey you describe, Daniel. I like the metaphors you use on this road between happiness and heartache. Nicely written! 7 Sandra

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/7/2016 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Mrs Sandra, for the heart smile. I always look forward to your lovely visits.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/6/2016 11:23:00 AM

Inspirational! Smooth flowing and rhyme with a message the world needs to hear! I like it!

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/6/2016 11:55:00 AM

Thank you Kim. I appreciate your time and friendly comments.