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Between Between

Between .. between From a collection of poems called (I'm the first responsible for my sadness) ________________ Always .. I run to catch the two rabbits - Once , combined togather – always come back Alone I showed to myself I am In - between .. between - Bewildered .. Barehanded ..

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/26/2024 2:30:00 AM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2016 3:43:00 PM

ahmed, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 1:37:00 AM

:) SKAT

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 8:40:00 AM

AHMED, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

James Hyler

Date: 5/12/2014 11:37:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/11/2014 3:58:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I have found this to be a friendly community of poetry lovers; I hope that will be your experience as well. Jump in, write and enjoy!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2014 4:08:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ahmed :) - I choose your first great written ABC poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2014 7:37:00 AM

Ahmed, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@