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She’s a vixen without knowing it Her big, wide eyes can tear men apart And gals get jealous, but won’t admit How Betty Boop’s poses rock the heart! When she coos high, a blown skirt would lift More tempting that Monroe’s photo shot; Batting curled lashes like twilight feathers As curvy hiplines would lightly slither. Tired of fame, Betty changes her style Wearing a hula to cover those knees Oh fans start to ponder for a while, How the red hair looks like a disease With earrings gone, where’s the real profile? A disguise which makes guy s whine, “Don’t tease!” But the wind ruffles Boop’s grass costume Revealing a gathered thigh in full bloom! .......... Shadow Hamilton’s Comic Book Character 5/27/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/8/2015 6:25:00 AM
So sassy!! Brilliant Nette! congratulations!
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Date: 6/6/2015 11:02:00 PM
sweet win Nette
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Date: 6/6/2015 1:23:00 PM
I just loved the clever and witty fun of this poem, Nette! It's so creatively written, too. You are so talented :) Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/6/2015 9:56:00 AM
I learned more about this character, from reading your poem !! There is more to Betty than I had known !! Congratulations dear Nette !! A great subject for this contest!
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Date: 6/6/2015 7:08:00 AM
This was a top winner from the start, Nette! Pleased to be back with merited congratulations:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/5/2015 5:42:00 PM
oh wow, that ending is super interesting, Nette. I did not even know that about Betty Boop. You chose a marvelous one for this theme!! BIG congrats on a fantastic win.
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Date: 6/5/2015 1:37:00 PM
This is so cute Nette - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/5/2015 10:21:00 AM
I love how you brought her to life, Nette! Congrats on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/5/2015 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 6/5/2015 6:57:00 AM
excellent description of Betty Booper Nette nice to see her here congrats on 1st place hugs 7
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Date: 5/30/2015 7:36:00 PM
You done Betty justice with this clever write! Hugs
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Date: 5/30/2015 12:19:00 AM
Absolutely loved the photo, ops I meant the poem, yes the poem, was there a photo attached?
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Date: 5/29/2015 11:00:00 AM
Loved this excellent humorous poem!! Such seemingly effortless writing, Nette, which am sure you probably slaved. Big Betty Boop fan also! A 7+ for sure! Good luck in contest!
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Date: 5/28/2015 12:38:00 PM
So clever... rhyming 'feathers' with 'slithers!' This is delightful... again, images are rife here, like a technicolor movie. I can just picture her flouncing about! Well done my dear!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/27/2015 2:34:00 PM
Well written contest entry..Way to go with this one..This cartoon character had the looks for sure..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2015 2:08:00 PM
A clever take on this comic book character, Nette, and with a pinch of humour thrown in as well! Top rating for you....a winner it is! hugs // paul
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Date: 5/27/2015 12:59:00 PM
nette, your poem is appealing and delightful, always exceptional writing, an impressive 7 from me and thanks for visiting my poem, a few . . .
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Date: 5/27/2015 11:00:00 AM
Your voice is added to the countless others (like myself) that hear your words and are taken back to a simpler time in life when Betty Pooper was considered risqué. Well done. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/27/2015 10:44:00 AM
Sleek, visual poem for a hot babe who still excites us. Only a poet like you can jazz Betty up! 7-up!
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Date: 5/27/2015 9:48:00 AM
It's been awhile. :) You chose quite the classic character, unsurprisingly. I really like what you did here, spot on.
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Date: 5/27/2015 7:45:00 AM
- A great poem about Betty :))) - Well done, luck in contest !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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