Better Men

I keep meetin 'em
don't really understand
why..
eyes always lookin ahead
calm.. 
slow to rile
yet quick to
lend a hand.

Kiss their mother on the cheek 
sayin a last goodbye..
going off to chase their fortune
never knowin' why.

Boys most, not yet men,
practiced at the two step.
farmers some..
worked out on the plain 
died in foreign holes
to lilting strains of 
Lili Marleen.

So special a rare thing,
wearin a toothy smile..
singin' praises of home
we'll all be home
in just awhile.

Necks turned dark, 
cracked and creviced  
under so many suns
they were good sons
the ones I knew.

Such a steadfast course, 
their bright future laid in, 
hoping just the same 
the pews they prayed in.

Full o' song with hearts unfurled,
now to waylaid dreams,
fine leaders of another world, 
all better men than me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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M  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 5:14 AM
A wonderful tribute poem Quoth….powerful and heartfelt….Love! Debx
Sands Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 6:50 AM
This is a great poem ! I agree with Gershon about the last line. Well done ! :)
Fowler Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Awesome men who are no better or no worse than another. Nicely written. :) Linda
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 8:03 AM
oh, where are these wonderful men?? I would so love to meet more like these. Love this.
Wolf Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 6:21 PM
Sweet tribute, although I beg to differ from the last line -- Not better, just different. ~ gw
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