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Betrayed By Heart and Soul

Forlorn, my treacherous heart has betrayed me. Pricked my conscience and disobeyed my mind, for it desired passion, and chose to set itself free, seeking a love, it should've declined. Love is blind. Feigning childhood innocence, it took control, and its betrayal caused great weeping in my soul. Since then, my life has been filled with gray skies. My soul empathized with heart's burning flames. Without my consent, they spawned a compromise... forming a treasonous tryst, making intimate claims. I was disturbed by the self-betrayal taking place, and prayed for God to forgive me with His grace. My soul longed for freedom to sing its spirit song. My heart yearned for romance, plying me with deceit. What could I do to show them both they were wrong? To them, my voice had become droll and obsolete. I will find a way to surmount the sabotage committed. Guilty, I find them, but with hope of being acquitted. April 15, 2022 Soul Betrayal Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 5/3/2022 2:17:00 AM
Excellent ink! Congrats on your win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/3/2022 11:58:00 AM
Thanks a lot for so many things, Mark.
Date: 4/26/2022 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Today, be blessed with your win...........
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/26/2022 9:11:00 AM
Thanks, Paula. If I'm to be blessed today, it's not because of a winning poem.
Date: 4/25/2022 12:06:00 AM
I really liked this one, Jenna, absolutely superb! Congrats on your win, thanks for sharing
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/26/2022 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Seeker, for honoring my poem with a placement in your contest.
Date: 4/24/2022 7:01:00 PM
Great monologue in the form of a beautiful rhyme, confessing all these. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/26/2022 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris.
Date: 4/22/2022 12:14:00 AM
Jenna, you depict so vividly the battleground of the soul. In my younger days I "sought a love I should have declined" more than once. My heart has since learned to seek out my head's counsel when making life altering decisions. This is excellent poetry and it ought to do very well in the contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/26/2022 8:29:00 AM
Hi John. If you managed to let your mind guide you rather than your heart, you're a stronger person than I am. Thank you for your wonderful comments. I value each one.
Date: 4/15/2022 12:17:00 PM
The only way the guilty get acquitted Jenna is by virtue of insanity, and reading your poem you kind of hint at that, all reason goes out the window when head over heels, so your paroled, but only released under strict curfew, 7pm-7am, good one for the contest, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/15/2022 12:36:00 PM
Love can certainly be characterized as a form of insanity. Not a fan of curfews. Thanks, David.

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