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Betrayed

bitter bitter he hacks the weeds sharp blade in the sunlight swish onto the tall grass, shovel into the dirt timing beats of his heart shirtless he sweats into the noon sun turning the dirt moving the earth bitter bitter taste in his mouth betrayed again again hands are steady heart is strong except the pain in the center in the center.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/27/2009 10:21:00 PM
vbery well described details of the labor as well the sufferring of pain and heartache that the subject endures,,,and Thank you for the words you left behind after reading my words,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 6/26/2009 10:40:00 AM
thank you
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Date: 6/25/2009 6:14:00 PM
Nice poem! I like the line"bitter bitter taste in his moputh! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/24/2009 12:19:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. This poem could be classified as a free verse. Much to think about in this poem. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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