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Betrayal of Love

Betrayal of love By Steven Cooke He cares not for conversation, Though he moans all day. He is not handsome, Yet beauty will seek him He cares not for any one lover, For he loves them all. My friend is ungainly, And children run from him. He cares not for broken hearts, Or for poets dreams, Though their pen would be silent, without him His manners are questionable, For he takes all, without asking. And they cannot refuse. He grows fat from their offers, But he always craves more, For his lovers cannot resist, The secret our lover keeps. They reveal all willingly, Just to hold him. Two strangers naked for love. For they need his touch, To complete their love. He is an addict , His addiction made worst. Tempted by the summers colour, Climaxed by sweet odours, A conspiracy of love. for him to taste. But I will betray him. I will calm him down. I shall rob him of his prize, For I too am a lover And I need his sweet offerings To give to my love. You see We know each other well He does not question me, Though I hold his real love for ransom I do not question him, Though my future is his to command, You see I am his keeper And he is the Honey bee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/1/2011 8:25:00 PM
I was held in thrall till you solved the puzzle in the last line. Your story telling is without equal Steven, yet another fascinating rhyme.
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Date: 8/31/2011 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations truly a thought provoking piece thank you
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Steven. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:48:00 AM
congrats steven on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful piece to share with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2011 4:20:00 PM
Intriguing write I love how you ended it Steven, awesome journey with this one..
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Date: 8/4/2011 4:14:00 AM
Excellent write Steven... Very creative!!!!!Thanks so much for sharing
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:22:00 PM
This poem is amazing. Love the creativity of the poem. Excellent
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Date: 7/31/2011 1:06:00 PM
An awesome poem on addiction Steven. I love the last two lines. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/31/2011 7:51:00 AM
An awesome command of the Who Am I and kept in suspense throughout, Steven. Your talent shines. Great write. I enjoyed it more each read.
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Date: 7/30/2011 8:14:00 PM
Very nice. Thanks of the visit today.
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Date: 7/30/2011 7:38:00 PM
Soup mail steven
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Date: 7/30/2011 6:28:00 PM
so enjoyed reading your impressive creative write steven... ultimate lines of intense drama and flare luv.. almost personification ...
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Date: 7/30/2011 1:39:00 PM
Yes! The busy bee. A real stanza turner. Love, daver
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Date: 7/30/2011 1:36:00 PM
Wow, this is fabulous, Steven. Great summary i the last two lines, but I could feel the angst of betrayal throughout. I have experience with this type of betrayal and it can make one feel so sad. Excellent write, Steven! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:55:00 PM
You take a complicated story and make a great verse out of it. I enjoyed reading it. Soup mail Steven.
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Date: 7/29/2011 7:10:00 PM
Great poem. I loved the erotic undertone. You make me wonder if it's true. Nice work.
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Date: 7/29/2011 6:09:00 PM
hmm, you alter ego, steve... a multi-layered, defined piece! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/29/2011 4:56:00 PM
Lovely write...bit confused as to who he be?....God bless....old Jack
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