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Betrayal My Love

Betrayal My Love Honor your own cold blackened heart You filthy dirty whore Demonic pagan worthless piece of godless wonderment You stealing thieving thing Betrayal is the soiled sewer’s game you play Taking joy at targeting the trust of others Wasting each and every soul you touch That touches you with money You give this world the ugliest thing you can Your promise in the form of candy and sweet snacks But give nothing back Sinister flashing smiles, advertises, pretty wrapped packaging Is all that you display But when it comes to paying you You steal my quarters Leave me empty What hurts worse? Craving for your sweets my love What is behind the machine you pretend to be? Betrayal, poverty, as I’m left standing No more money to enter in your slots No more quarters in my pockets and no more candies You worthless vending machine monstrosity You thieving *****! Give me back my money or I’ll break the glass! 8/28/14 Any Old Poem Will Do #3 - contest

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Date: 3/2/2015 12:17:00 AM
Superb win and write Earl! Big congrats! loved the way u changed the whole thing in the end!
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Date: 3/2/2015 1:17:00 AM
Hi Dr. Sharma, Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was just having fun with this one. Have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl
Date: 3/1/2015 10:58:00 PM
I caught on pretty quickly..have felt that way myself at times. Enjoyed your poem and congrats...BG
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Date: 3/2/2015 1:12:00 AM
Hi Barbara, Thanks! I enjoyed your haiku entry. Congratulations on your #1 win. Take care. Earl
Date: 3/1/2015 7:56:00 PM
Earl, CONGRATS on your win. ThanXs for supporting my contest ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 3/2/2015 1:05:00 AM
Hi SKAT! Thanks for your consideration. I hope you enjoyed it. Take care. Earl
Date: 8/28/2014 5:42:00 PM
HAHAHA oh Earl, that is unique, such vivid language! and I liked the twist at the end. I really did enjoy reading this, you keep me on a rollercoaster and I love the rides when I read your mind, you are one of a kind my friend xx
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Date: 8/28/2014 7:38:00 PM
Hi Casarah, Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I could have called it Venting on the Vending but it would have given away the ending. I hope you know that I do not have animus or any ill will towards machines or people. I've seen people go crazy when they don't get their candy fix or money back. Have a pleasant evening. Take care. Earl Earl

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