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Betrayal Leaves a Scar

My heart was bruised I was simply shocked Dragged through dirt and abused I had opened my door and left it unlocked I had been betrayed Abandoned and left to rot in the shade Watched as slowly I decayed How could this be happening to me What ever happened to destiny And the mere probability I was falsely accused Didn’t know why I was brutally mocked There should have been no reason to be afraid Leaving but a scar and the mystery of empathy AP: 1st place 2020, Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on November 2, 2018 for contest FRAGMENTED RHYME NOVEMBER 2018 WRITING CHALLENGE sponsored by DEAR HEART - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 12/4/2018 8:12:00 PM
Well done and so powerfully written, Line. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/4/2018 8:15:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/4/2018 7:27:00 PM
Well Written! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/4/2018 8:15:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/4/2018 5:43:00 PM
I enjoyed reading , Line, very well written . Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/4/2018 8:15:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 12/3/2018 4:36:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 12/3/2018 8:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. I enjoyed your contest and particularly appreciated landing on the podium.
Date: 11/3/2018 10:07:00 AM
Well done, I can feel it as I read it Good luck in the contest ! :)
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Date: 11/3/2018 10:48:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.
Date: 11/3/2018 5:22:00 AM
it is a cold cold world
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Date: 11/3/2018 6:48:00 AM
And that is exactly why it is so important to recognize the people close to us who are genuinely good... and keep only those close to us.
Date: 11/2/2018 11:26:00 PM
You always rise to the occasion, Line. Great job! This one was not easy. I know from the experience of trying it.
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Date: 11/3/2018 6:49:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

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